tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-75009442024-03-28T20:27:35.202-07:00Alamo PreacherAlamo Preacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05382309157117039998noreply@blogger.comBlogger135125truetag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7500944.post-34686228141495493562023-09-27T04:00:00.005-07:002023-09-27T04:00:24.693-07:00Strict Wife Magazine.<p> Back in 2011, fourteen years ago, I started writing a fake magazine called 'Strict Wife'. It started with the cover - suggestive article headlines - hinting at a magazine filled with content for Women in Female Led Relationships. You've probably seen similar kinds of things online. But I went ahead and actually wrote some articles for it and pasted in images I found.</p><p>I've been going back to it, on and off ever since. In 2019 I reformatted it and wrote a bunch of new stuff. In fact, one or two full stories began as articles in the spoof magazine and then I developed them into complete stories later.</p><p>Also, I sometimes write one-page questionnaires or short things that tongue-in-cheek might be the kind of thing you'd find in a magazine, but in a cuckold/femdom context. I did these for this blog. "So he called you Mommy during Sex." or "Is he the right boy for you?" or "How to introduce your boyfriend into your marriage." I added those to the magazine as I did them too.</p><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhh8dxJytTvLDfQz4QhCDOP8q0vLfohxMXH9WD53Sf90T8QueWvIs2Sg03JT7jG6y7U1bbDaHTSg_BIC_4mZsvU9z4CJarNqzSoI28X91wjogMmPiL8Eg5j73CxdNkQ-PfR2HzEqGY_Tup6RQ5kcWLTuWLzmahhXpienr7dlEwq5nKbUg8F0hPq/s9921/NewStrictWife%20JULY23%20TOC4.png" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="7016" data-original-width="9921" height="452" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhh8dxJytTvLDfQz4QhCDOP8q0vLfohxMXH9WD53Sf90T8QueWvIs2Sg03JT7jG6y7U1bbDaHTSg_BIC_4mZsvU9z4CJarNqzSoI28X91wjogMmPiL8Eg5j73CxdNkQ-PfR2HzEqGY_Tup6RQ5kcWLTuWLzmahhXpienr7dlEwq5nKbUg8F0hPq/w640-h452/NewStrictWife%20JULY23%20TOC4.png" width="640" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;">Avery Cristy is <i>not</i> a featured editor.</td></tr></tbody></table><p>Now, with all the accumulated content it's over 100 pages, with a lot of illustrations and images - all cribbed from the internet. </p><p>Over time, the form and tone solidified. The magazine is supposedly written by a group of contributing editors - all women. The audience is women in FLR marriages, or who are at least FLR-curious. They conduct surveys, interview leading psychologists, publish letters, and do special series on aspects of female-led-marriages. </p><p>There's an explicit tone and a meta-tone. On the surface, this is all serious, scholarly work for the FLR community. Their core philosophy is that men are to be loved and cherished, but many of them are weak-willed, submissive creatures who are much happier in loving, but submissive relationships with their wives. They are not to be casually abused, but physical correction can have it's place. Cuckolding is a natural, but not essential progression for a wife-led marriage. </p><p>The meta-tone is tongue-in-cheek, rather than ironic. The parallels between a typical womens' interest magazine article and those in Strict Wife is meant to be funny. The tone of condescending affection for husbands, while advising on how to break their spirit or control their lives is also humorously intended.</p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjZO1x98YMxxeuPc3kRtsDrKKiGj6iVS2o8R9X58rhEBU7yLGM7lR-Xk0p71wjWKW_hyJcGRFGGat5z7w_fhoGRqZSGwi0QRmIE8OThli92_bXHwXwZ7EvT0yqRSD_0Z60Ktq_ke_7lFpLrQzumnIiv9FRq5Wwa0tw79GmzQDUuPP4M6jwTwDNl/s9921/NewStrictWife%20JULY23%20TOC47.png" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="7016" data-original-width="9921" height="452" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjZO1x98YMxxeuPc3kRtsDrKKiGj6iVS2o8R9X58rhEBU7yLGM7lR-Xk0p71wjWKW_hyJcGRFGGat5z7w_fhoGRqZSGwi0QRmIE8OThli92_bXHwXwZ7EvT0yqRSD_0Z60Ktq_ke_7lFpLrQzumnIiv9FRq5Wwa0tw79GmzQDUuPP4M6jwTwDNl/w640-h452/NewStrictWife%20JULY23%20TOC47.png" width="640" /></a></div><p></p><p>This tone hides the both subtle and explicit fact that the whole magazine is about love. Even in the most outre femdom articles about cuckolding or pegging or, God-help-us, castration, the voices of the authors or readers always come back to the love they have for their husbands and their husbands for them. This stuff only works in a loving context. If you don't love your wife, then you might get angry if she sleeps with someone else, but for gut-wrenching emotional and erotic reaction, you need to love her. Similarly, many of the articles are about the emotional effort required to properly train and condition a husband. All throughout these, there's the stated caveat, that if you don't love him, then what's the point?</p><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEinI1otNITv_Wq6V3FwwI0wADtm_TDrfbmaukFqsCBVLO8ks0v71I07mhoQG92qu6xabk6v5AfbVSZR9n42Oy2kafl_xacyxZWeK_OKCG9GEfgWif_IfmsV7mU8z5-gcHGBPwp8QkDOvkh4JT2hpovr6qEBspK2GV-0zQF5DlRgMLIRrnegDl1C/s9921/NewStrictWife%20JULY23%20TOC43.png" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="7016" data-original-width="9921" height="452" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEinI1otNITv_Wq6V3FwwI0wADtm_TDrfbmaukFqsCBVLO8ks0v71I07mhoQG92qu6xabk6v5AfbVSZR9n42Oy2kafl_xacyxZWeK_OKCG9GEfgWif_IfmsV7mU8z5-gcHGBPwp8QkDOvkh4JT2hpovr6qEBspK2GV-0zQF5DlRgMLIRrnegDl1C/w640-h452/NewStrictWife%20JULY23%20TOC43.png" width="640" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;">Loving wives care about their husband's reputation.</td></tr></tbody></table><p></p><p>And the articles feed into other writing or are spin-offs from stories I'm working on. One example is the "Your Boys" article - still unfinished. In it, I wrote short excerpts from women in cuckolding FLR relationships where they discussed the confusing relationships between their husbands and their sexual partners. One of those is clearly the Ashley, Dave and Mike relationship from Dave McManus's The Reluctant Cuckold series.</p><p>So if you're interested in Reluctant Cuckold, and my attempts at a third part, here's that article (unfinished) as images - sharing the pdf is beyond blogger.</p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEj0LMWIhG_td6XKO9RRiLcHeEm8rFQcJfXctA2u2Pvx3gZxQN80eAuhX1iOZVbno_ft6rWxL89aRg43fpODEkQYwFiJbK-cMPdfMiCmb-oKetb8OBPaqDnz_3MW-WIoGgzlGCYLOMoOBs2hspCIyT5bjmAY4ZgVlHyP4bE9ccCHLXbQwVYPlYTV/s9921/NewStrictWife%20JULY23%20TOC30.png" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="7016" data-original-width="9921" height="141" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEj0LMWIhG_td6XKO9RRiLcHeEm8rFQcJfXctA2u2Pvx3gZxQN80eAuhX1iOZVbno_ft6rWxL89aRg43fpODEkQYwFiJbK-cMPdfMiCmb-oKetb8OBPaqDnz_3MW-WIoGgzlGCYLOMoOBs2hspCIyT5bjmAY4ZgVlHyP4bE9ccCHLXbQwVYPlYTV/w200-h141/NewStrictWife%20JULY23%20TOC30.png" width="200" /> </a><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgsguINPz3v8NPMymaVqWk_bQQJM2rObHRxU8s6HjuvtwUua5h3TmgN3vEaU-SQ9wPUv2V0VM3SldX9WDla1WHCoYTTZFWmnYA4aYFEMIATGnLVA6u71iFXPxul9ZemLDKEeVxX4NI2mP79ppKkbECvFghZImmnzde-8_RCytdZoAqW5hxL3SYM/s9921/NewStrictWife%20JULY23%20TOC31.png" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; 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text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhDYK63Hlz6YPvzDHt_tOG3CgzPRV-_Xa2p9qGCKe3IBC7KQPF8KeA6xxAb_FVWJP8_Iw-_LiGRvLEHLlSAC1QCQNxJtFzzr-DdStRazPhpsOKGQIzr-J-1DXv1NPF2HuYgMct8mhFuIPSCB0_Ej5-InW5objQEp81Svnn2ZhLyImr9i8nl5kuC/s2100/YouAreCaught.png" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="1485" data-original-width="2100" height="452" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhDYK63Hlz6YPvzDHt_tOG3CgzPRV-_Xa2p9qGCKe3IBC7KQPF8KeA6xxAb_FVWJP8_Iw-_LiGRvLEHLlSAC1QCQNxJtFzzr-DdStRazPhpsOKGQIzr-J-1DXv1NPF2HuYgMct8mhFuIPSCB0_Ej5-InW5objQEp81Svnn2ZhLyImr9i8nl5kuC/w640-h452/YouAreCaught.png" width="640" /></a></div><br /> <p></p>Alamo Preacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05382309157117039998noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7500944.post-26098991280155770352023-09-19T01:31:00.000-07:002023-09-19T01:31:00.708-07:00Anna Claire Clouds PMV<h2 style="text-align: center;">Anna Claire Clouds PMV</h2><p> As I may have written a few times already, sometimes when I start a PMV I get very enthusiastic about and idea and then run out of steam. But sometimes, I get really into it and plough through very quickly. The difference, always, is the pornstar. And it's never how they look, but how they act in scenes.</p><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhsq3NjLMlnjSkj2Sopar974Ru9SrMp7rZ8IQld09dF461KJD3ao9WzmGa7yMyDlx2ittl7W1qmIWi_Zm90lwQOl-Np8Y7opKWD3ESEmYzUFDtqss7pFuarlLqp4JgHiuhKW0lz6l-To3BFRqY4_U9xuUYYlDgenZJCuWqk3mwrOHauYSGTy0TU/s600/ezgif-2-d472659d6b.gif" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="338" data-original-width="600" height="360" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhsq3NjLMlnjSkj2Sopar974Ru9SrMp7rZ8IQld09dF461KJD3ao9WzmGa7yMyDlx2ittl7W1qmIWi_Zm90lwQOl-Np8Y7opKWD3ESEmYzUFDtqss7pFuarlLqp4JgHiuhKW0lz6l-To3BFRqY4_U9xuUYYlDgenZJCuWqk3mwrOHauYSGTy0TU/w640-h360/ezgif-2-d472659d6b.gif" width="640" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;">Anna introduces herself.</td></tr></tbody></table><p>Anna Claire Clouds is one of those stars that just seems to leap out of the screen. Glances, sounds, smiles, movement. She does everything so well and she's done a bunch of great scenes. She's on a career high right now, and the main thing that slowed me down on this one was that new scenes kept coming out that I felt I had to include.<table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEiDEC0YqR2JfNYBkOjpFsnsjwZjI9fhUBF9aOowE6-Tjq1wCZeaONT0wS6VgpWrlEG1bOVXnePlOzIBjcoVOk3-fq_8F0nEl4KpQYp7QbrXqdnfZMkz3iLdPX-oGO2_KFBmK1fbXUGh7t74IhjlKQxw-YYsPq4whTG6CkIZGx1iLT9gbENoW_6Y/s600/ezgif-3-ad63974323.gif" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="338" data-original-width="600" height="360" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEiDEC0YqR2JfNYBkOjpFsnsjwZjI9fhUBF9aOowE6-Tjq1wCZeaONT0wS6VgpWrlEG1bOVXnePlOzIBjcoVOk3-fq_8F0nEl4KpQYp7QbrXqdnfZMkz3iLdPX-oGO2_KFBmK1fbXUGh7t74IhjlKQxw-YYsPq4whTG6CkIZGx1iLT9gbENoW_6Y/w640-h360/ezgif-3-ad63974323.gif" width="640" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;">Amazing scene from Amateur Allure</td></tr></tbody></table></p><p>For this, I used two Chemical Brothers tracks, ElektroBank and Hey Boy, Hey Girl. I don't transition between them very well, partly because ElektroBank has a stupid MC part at the end and then starts really suddenly. There's no way to blend it in easily. This also makes this quite long. To be honest I had trouble finding where to cut it off. </p><p>Only ACC is in this. She's done many many threesome and girl-girl scenes and as usual I skipped all of those so I can concentrate on her and her amazing face. I find including scenes with another actor just doesn't feel right.<table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEj6EURskwMFsgzttm3l7dSUN54eaFVWYtaBiAT5s-fwfhSHwdyaB_ZvLxcYJpqkO1bSacYkBfaPYAHYZYKHr_zKtvWfqILxE9D3dNakCldRSd2amZXmXAxTa-Kd1bbzRJ-Bf_E2XNQfgLudUmDZZjZ7AHcjlhaE8YvY7jnUGb6OF0Cy9CXhXmjD/s600/ezgif-5-b4db29e102.gif" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="338" data-original-width="600" height="360" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEj6EURskwMFsgzttm3l7dSUN54eaFVWYtaBiAT5s-fwfhSHwdyaB_ZvLxcYJpqkO1bSacYkBfaPYAHYZYKHr_zKtvWfqILxE9D3dNakCldRSd2amZXmXAxTa-Kd1bbzRJ-Bf_E2XNQfgLudUmDZZjZ7AHcjlhaE8YvY7jnUGb6OF0Cy9CXhXmjD/w640-h360/ezgif-5-b4db29e102.gif" width="640" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;">Anna really puts it all into her performance</td></tr></tbody></table></p><p>So, what's so great about her? First off - she has incredible energy. She's incapable of just lying there. She's bucking, she's writhing, she's pushing back, she's grabbing at her partner. She's also so into the scene that at times her partners seem to be just clinging on for dear life.<table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEin6VnAcGtODzfYdphXj67ZjFegXJ0CUSO6fo5do4uYFWttlc8DSMPwVNGCtDgKNaXHw6XyMhojiTptbwsSfaB0hCcO5LqNLPC_yTGwtdd6daglp7eTZkP5UIBRN-_c5tzbjcCmbrLygXO18ZWehbJcg2xw2rkmS3qOjec4i5MX2IhIg2PtCqaq/s600/ezgif-3-b850620b65.gif" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="338" data-original-width="600" height="360" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEin6VnAcGtODzfYdphXj67ZjFegXJ0CUSO6fo5do4uYFWttlc8DSMPwVNGCtDgKNaXHw6XyMhojiTptbwsSfaB0hCcO5LqNLPC_yTGwtdd6daglp7eTZkP5UIBRN-_c5tzbjcCmbrLygXO18ZWehbJcg2xw2rkmS3qOjec4i5MX2IhIg2PtCqaq/w640-h360/ezgif-3-b850620b65.gif" width="640" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;">Anna looks amazing</td></tr></tbody></table></p><p>Secondly, like all my favorites she gives those amazing glances under her eyelashes to the camera. I never like scenes with no eye contact and Anna just can't help catching the camera over and over. Picking out those clips was a pleasure. There's an eyelid flick around every corner and each one is more expressive than the last.<table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEi_Kk8vMdW5HycZEfsiyTskS8cAjT8o18CLXFdtlbbAfFKtlVOlVCBzWls9oJXH8uwmv-UspQrWPVme_r9mD-GuX7yzjkmEDQoSB9iW4Pqb6khB4t1UNm0ywdC6hItOkm_WBHSwFeBgiSr2iC0B1BNawqO__J5vvfH3JKGsbEt2Dqd3dywNFnlC/s600/ezgif-4-caef66ccbc.gif" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="338" data-original-width="600" height="360" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEi_Kk8vMdW5HycZEfsiyTskS8cAjT8o18CLXFdtlbbAfFKtlVOlVCBzWls9oJXH8uwmv-UspQrWPVme_r9mD-GuX7yzjkmEDQoSB9iW4Pqb6khB4t1UNm0ywdC6hItOkm_WBHSwFeBgiSr2iC0B1BNawqO__J5vvfH3JKGsbEt2Dqd3dywNFnlC/w640-h360/ezgif-4-caef66ccbc.gif" width="640" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;">Kissing dominates the whole break section.</td></tr></tbody></table></p><p>But what really makes her stand out is kissing. Anna kisses her partner in almost every scene she does. And not just some fake, over-directed things. She grabs them, throws an arm around them and works her face onto theirs. She loves kissing and nothing makes a scene better. I include a couple of long sections where she's just throwing herself at her partners, sometimes to their obvious shock and surprise.</p><p>There's no fancy effects or editing tricks in this. It's practically all just zoom and pan, pan and zoom. I colour-corrected some clips where the edits jarred, but apart form that it's all just Anna as the original file was published, with each clip cut to the beat of each track.</p><p><br /></p><p><br /></p>Alamo Preacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05382309157117039998noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7500944.post-82737732218166130042023-09-15T01:32:00.002-07:002023-09-15T08:27:12.204-07:00New Cartoon<p> A while ago, I did <a href="https://alamopreacher.blogspot.com/2023/02/a-bad-idea-cartoon-pmv.html" target="_blank">this</a>.</p><p>I've been working on another video - not a sequel, but the same style, ever since.</p><p>The basic story here is - our hero has cuckold fantasies - he jerks off to internet dommes and cuckold porn, but he doesn't ever imagine his actual wife in these scenarios - he just likes the porn. </p><p>Then his wife, played by Eva Lovia gets a job offer to work on a TV show in L.A. - a big opportunity for her, but it will mean a month away from home. Thinking this will be a great opportunity to really indulge his cuck porn addiction, he encourages her, and even calls in a favour from an old college buddy who is now a bigshot TV producer to help secure her the job. </p><p>There's a tearful goodbye as she jets off. But before he gets a chance to revel in the privacy and his cuck porn collection, his wife calls to say her sister needs a place to stay for a while , so shes going to move into their spare room for an open-ended period.</p><p>His sister in law, played by Emma Lux, is totally different to his innocent wife. She sees straight through him to see the beta cuck loser he really is. Within days she's ferreted out his porn collection, his online accounts and his particular shameful fetish. </p><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgx_Bw_OvbPEngiRFsbL8T6FKilf4qCxpoI7s_t1GWYdeDMwyi5A_q9FfGwRCMaa2RStNd7RTrwMK81K8LLeFwyURcaz6-DuthoallYmsWVg_Xoz0QKrrR84fMKNzbDS1LeXvyZhexNh5PMSltgCWZ463DbIWDs3-OJrHtt2yCv6H0xZu1keBOt/s800/ezgif-2-ac70289a41.gif" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="450" data-original-width="800" height="360" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgx_Bw_OvbPEngiRFsbL8T6FKilf4qCxpoI7s_t1GWYdeDMwyi5A_q9FfGwRCMaa2RStNd7RTrwMK81K8LLeFwyURcaz6-DuthoallYmsWVg_Xoz0QKrrR84fMKNzbDS1LeXvyZhexNh5PMSltgCWZ463DbIWDs3-OJrHtt2yCv6H0xZu1keBOt/w640-h360/ezgif-2-ac70289a41.gif" width="640" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;">Emma explains the awful truth.</td></tr></tbody></table><p></p><br /><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: justify;"><span style="text-align: left;">She blackmails and manipulates him, and within a couple of weeks he's been manoeuvred intoto agreeing to his wife cucking him in LA with the friend he called in the favour for. Emma makes this look like it's all his idea. There's a series of escalating video calls with his wife as she casting-couches her way to success, where he has to pretend he's cool with all this. Meanwhile the sister in law humiliates, teases and bullies him at home. </span></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: justify;"><span style="text-align: left;"><br /></span></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: justify;"><span style="text-align: left;">There's quite a bit of ambiguity and double-meaning in the conversations between Peter and Eva, where he thinks she's asking his agreement for her to interview for bigger roles, but it could also mean she's asking if he's okay with her hooking up with his friend.</span></div><p>In the scenes with Emma, she never explicitly blackmails him, although she's sure to leave that impression as she takes compromising photos and videos of him.</p><p>I'm happy with the casting choices. I have a ton of clips of Eva on the phone, doing cam stuff, interviews etc. And her higher-class videos for Digital Playground and Vixen have loads of story elements. Emma is just so deliciously mean and has done so much content it's relatively easy to find clips that work.</p><p>As before though, the whole process of cutting, copying, prequelling and porting the files is a pain. Also, the timing and pacing is so awkward in Premiere - getting text and visuals to line up in interesting ways is painful and making edits to them is exasperating as you work with the video, frames, text boxes etc. etc.</p><p>The process pf writing it, is even more organic than with a standard PMV. I have a rough outline of where the scene is going, pick clips for that, lay them out, switch the positions, closeups etc. so it has some visual interest. But making text match the visual to match the text is a back-and-forth balancing act, so when I have a good scene I'll try to write dialog to match it, but other times I can't write what I want because there's no clip that can make it work visually. </p><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgQ-yOVjEc8zgZvuSyS1Ib0o7B0vj2XQA-URL4dpxYJzBiUlZAIznlqd0lcDVXXr8P51BhVUKUZnsCvoby113_2IgxXBbR3_xD7Nv_VrBiDpz8NhDoG1o2PiXCF5lmHNNBRu9WxZb-au0k15hJHoMhs5iw_B6kQJ5fIW7awFitlYbvS6vO23g-u/s800/ezgif-2-83e5486141.gif" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="450" data-original-width="800" height="360" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgQ-yOVjEc8zgZvuSyS1Ib0o7B0vj2XQA-URL4dpxYJzBiUlZAIznlqd0lcDVXXr8P51BhVUKUZnsCvoby113_2IgxXBbR3_xD7Nv_VrBiDpz8NhDoG1o2PiXCF5lmHNNBRu9WxZb-au0k15hJHoMhs5iw_B6kQJ5fIW7awFitlYbvS6vO23g-u/w640-h360/ezgif-2-83e5486141.gif" width="640" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;">Emma reassures her cuck</td></tr></tbody></table><br /><p>The main problem though is that I tend to write dialog-heavy, over-written screeds of text. Cutting it down to the most-impactful essentials is really difficult. Comics are not supposed to be walls of text with a few pictures. I have to constantly fight the urge to blurb ever longer paragraphs into text boxes. This is a battle I am consistently losing.</p><p>My appreciation for comic writers and artists grows all the time. Even if I had complete freedom to create any image in a panel I don't think I could do much better than my clumsy efforts. Brevity, and show-don't-tell are the hardest things to master. </p><p>I estmate this is around two thirds towards a complete first draft. But I have to go back and fix timings in a lot of places, and where I've done simple text boxes and a frame of video or two, I need to rework sections so it's more visually arresting. Plus, groan, a lot of the text needs to be edited down to make it concise. The groan there is that reducing text means reducing video length with all the knock-on effects. </p><p>I'm constantly amazed at the visual impact that this cartoon filter has. I'm working with images of two of the most beautiful women, ever, but when I lay out the cartoonified images they have an impact that seems even greater than the originals. Does this mean I'm intimidated by real women and really see them as unreal fantasy figures? Yes, probably. In fact, that should have been obvious some time ago.</p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><br /><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgbk3cLdMnD1wsIqaXxIK6WH_43U5lFTRCnuD7bnaeKozN01d_G81eNwxd0TKrut3i4UZ35NlbdU3DTEodgyu5rfWcYbM3vn4Dkc699Ttr9pkXN0yVYmxMOCXG063dTgYxHPOyflx3LqJXD4K2yS2-_4S5U2drNghGj2MZ0iK3W5yOB_ihDHhQ2/s800/ezgif-2-f70f31b098.gif" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="450" data-original-width="800" height="360" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgbk3cLdMnD1wsIqaXxIK6WH_43U5lFTRCnuD7bnaeKozN01d_G81eNwxd0TKrut3i4UZ35NlbdU3DTEodgyu5rfWcYbM3vn4Dkc699Ttr9pkXN0yVYmxMOCXG063dTgYxHPOyflx3LqJXD4K2yS2-_4S5U2drNghGj2MZ0iK3W5yOB_ihDHhQ2/w640-h360/ezgif-2-f70f31b098.gif" width="640" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;">Cuck therapy.</td></tr></tbody></table></div><p></p><p>As usual the idea of publishing this gives me the heebie jeebies. Not that it's disturbing - as usual the whole story is suffused with love and affection. There's always a happy-ever-after for me. But even more than with a PMV, I've taken clips of performers work and mashed them into something else. I've put words in their mouths and presented the whole as my own work. I doubt Eva Lovia would care one jot at this time, but Emma Lux is a working performer making amazing content. I doubt she'd give permission for this to be published and worse, she might be really annoyed and upset about it. Making either of them unhappy is a horrible idea. </p><p>I plan to send Emma a message telling her about it. While it's not her words, and the video is changed, who know, she might like it, and I'll put promotional messages for her IWC and onlyfans all over it. Eva is a different matter, she has her podcast now, and I can't imagine there's a bunch of cuck-hounds who want to subscribe to it. Though of course, there's just her coffee tip-jar thing, so maybe I could promote that.</p><p>This is just window-dressing to assuage my guilt at stealing their content and repurposing it of course. </p><p>Working on the project is fun, but frustrating. I don't get to write at the pace I'd like. The visuals make it more restrictive and editing is a pain. But, working on the double path where the text feeds off the available scenes and the visuals inspire the text is very satisfying. </p><p>I think this one will finish up being around twelve minutes long. I'm sometimes inclined to write it as an actual story but I'd feel guilty about writing anything while Ashley Mike and Dave linger on my hard drive, accusing me when I waste hours on other stuff.</p><p><br /></p><p><br /></p><p><br /></p><p><br /></p>Alamo Preacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05382309157117039998noreply@blogger.com4tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7500944.post-35010076590620293252023-08-28T15:18:00.001-07:002023-09-15T01:33:50.515-07:00Cuck Storm Replacement Comments.<p> Didn't expect so many comments. It's great. Thank you all.</p><p>I feel guilty that I've only shared excerpts. I'm planning to share the first four chapers (the first one is much the same, breakfast-in-bed one from the first version) and an outline of all the rest. I've written a bunch of those, but they don't all connect up yet. </p><p>In the meantime, because Blogger's comments are so crap - </p><blockquote><p><span style="background-color: white; color: #0b5394; font-family: arial; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 0.25px;">It’s hard to say what’s too much when you only have fragments to go by. Like you said in your earlier post, the slow burn of his cuckolding needed the mundane chapters to help build up the impact of the erotic ones. Everytime he thinks things are going back to normal, he gets hammered by his cucking. If you have enough downtime between the erotic events, I think it should be fine.</span></p></blockquote><p> I have two storylines that serve for downtime - his increasing success and dynamism at work and Ashley's increasing dissatisfaction with her own. As I see it, his attempts to distract himself from his reaction to Ashley cucking him make him work harder. Plus, they way this whole scenario has knocked him out of his complacency make him more of a risk-taker, which leads to good outcomes for work. But he never connects this to him becoming more attractive to Ashley, even though it is. </p><p>It takes a while to reveal, but the rumours about Ashley in her workplace are affecting her. Her colleagues disrespect her, eventually leading to her leaving that workplace and changing her career.</p><blockquote><p><br style="-webkit-tap-highlight-color: transparent; background-color: white; color: #37474f; font-family: Roboto, RobotoDraft, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 0.25px;" /><span style="background-color: white; color: #0b5394; font-family: arial; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 0.25px;">I really liked the characterization of Ashley. You made it clear that she pities Dave which indicates that she does care for him. Seeing your husband reduced in status like that can’t be easy. But also, you can see her cunning. She knows that if she controls his orgasms, she controls the relationship. In this way, the nofap plot line is very logical. It makes me think that Ashley’s mother is going to play a much bigger role in our perception of the character. She and Ashley’s father got divorced at a young age, and this is an attempt to prevent that fate from ever happening to her.</span></p></blockquote><p>I don't know if she pities him. She's intrigued by his reaction. She absolutely does love him, and she loves the way this lifestyle makes her feel, but she's concerned that if he continues to masturbate alone then their relationship will suffer. Plus, although he loves feeling slutty and Dave knowing about it, she shies away from him seeing her as she's just old-school embarrassed about someone watching her fuck. Especially as she's so submissive with Mike and she feels Dave might lose respect for her if he actually witnesses this in person. This is exacerbated by the way Mike talks about it - he's most interested in the cuck dynamic where he is essentially dominating Dave, by dominating her, and she doesn't really buy into that in the same way.</p><blockquote><p><span style="background-color: white; color: #0b5394; font-family: arial; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 0.25px;">The audio at the end was a neat idea. It does seem pretty elaborate for a new cuckoldress to do. But like I said, without reading the work as a whole, it’s hard to tell if it’s too much too soon and it is an idea that I don’t see often. I’m wondering if he’s going to not go for it, but then he gets caught snooping on her laptop or something later. It would be a temptation that he can’t resist.</span></p></blockquote><p>She wants them to do this together. Before this she's tried different ways for her and Dave to have sex in a cuckold context, short of him watching live. She wants him to jerk off over her in a way she controls. This is her latest attempt. There's video to follow in this scene. The point (for her) is for Dave to talk to her about how he feels.</p><p>From Another Anonymous user, or the same one, who can tell?</p><blockquote><p><span style="background-color: white; color: #0b5394; font-family: arial; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 0.25px;">I liked this excerpt more than the one with Mike - think I have a vague disagreement about importance of Mike. Would rather see her go back to Jim, do something with Jay, and continue with Ryan and Chang stuff. Mike is great and he can be focus but I am less interested in them *dating*. That being said, I love it all, lol.</span></p></blockquote><p><span style="background-color: white; color: #0b5394; font-family: arial; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 0.25px;"></span></p><blockquote><span style="color: #0b5394; font-family: arial;"><span face="Roboto, RobotoDraft, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" style="background-color: white; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 0.25px;">Given your photo choice, I'd love to see Ashley also open up with a sleeve tattoo or getting her tits pierced with Tamara. 100 percent agree with wanting to know more about submissive shirt.</span> </span></blockquote><p></p><p>Oof. I'm pretty invested in Mike. I don't think we'll actually 'see' her with anyone else. That said, there's a world of imagination out there. Jim Murta is problematic for Ashley. However, Jay does feature in a fantasy session early on. (That fantasy scene in his parents house is one of the best in the originals I think).</p><p>Ryan and Chang never really did it for me, but there's that whole party with the submissive TeeShirt and Tamara to revisit. I'm writing that at the moment.</p><p>From Bermugandr</p><blockquote><p><span style="background-color: white; color: #0b5394; font-family: arial; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 0.25px;">I don't think the pace is too fast. I think the previous version was maybe a bit too fast but I really liked the content in general. I wanted to see what happened next and the interactions with the friend and anther guy. To me I think an increase in pace was needed at this point. It's like the beginning of a coaster where you go slow as your pulled up to the top. I felt like at the end of the second book we where at the top of the coaster. Like at some point his internal tension has to break one way or another, no change in pace isn't realistic either. Often the first step is the hardest and things snowball from there with each step after coming faster. Either he starts accepting bit by bit that he wants to be cuckolded and a Sissy or he has to reject to all together. </span></p></blockquote><p>I'm of the view that the originals work so well because while he thinks he wants to reject this, every action he takes is a subconscious attempt to embrace it. He sabotages himself at every turn. When he accepts it, even bit by bit, the story is over. If he rejects it, then it turns into something different where Ashley is doing this to him over his protests. I'm trying to keep that mental dichotomy up in Dave's head, but each ratchet makes it more and more unbelievable. </p><blockquote><p><span style="background-color: white; color: #0b5394; font-family: arial; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 0.25px;">I really liked the revaluation that she had been doing her own research and wasn't just going along with what mike told her to do. It removes a lot of his fears. I think your set up in this section could maybe be near to the front and a good jumping off point into something from your previous long story which is her own research, that outside of the games in there normal life he's still her man and husband and only his whining makes her lose any real respect for him.</span></p></blockquote><p>Yeah. Ashley is smart. She sees through Mike's self-serving bullshit easier than Dave. She likes spending time with him and she loves fucking him, but essentially he's a friend who she could never be with as a partner. From the start, she's realised there's something slightly twisted in Mike. He's more interested in his Dominant relationship with Dave than with her. He likes fucking her, but that's mostly because it's a way to reinforce his dominance of Dave. He has no interest in being with a single woman. So of course, she's done her own research and she realises not everything is as it seems. </p><p>She knows Dave's whining is not the full story - it's obvious he's really getting off on the whole scene. What she wants is for him is to be able to have a 'cuckold orgasm' with her. </p><blockquote><p><span style="color: #0b5394; font-family: arial;"><span face="Roboto, RobotoDraft, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" style="background-color: white; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 0.25px;"> If you want her to continue as a loving wife, it's also key for her to tell him and him to slowly understand it's there love that makes this so good for her and makes it work at all. Like maybe on an arousal scale sex with him alone is like a 2, sex with mike alone is like a 5, she wouldn't be able to let go so much without him in the picture, but watching him masturbate to her and mikes video is like an 8 and having sex with Mike knowing that love of her life is at home unable to get pleasure and that he's thinking about how the love of his life is out with another man is like a 100. Not exactly like that and he may not full believe it at first.</span> </span></p></blockquote><p>Mostly agree, except I'd reverse those last two - her ideal scene is Dave (submissively) jerking off over her after she's been completely satisfied. Imagining Dave denied and desperate while she gets fucked by Mike is cool, but she really wants to hear how she makes him feel and how, for him, she's this incredibly unattainable forbidding sexual being who's also a totally wanton slut. </p><p>Same user? Different? Who Knows? But, wow. You've put so much thought into this. Thank you. I'm sure it's not desreved.</p><blockquote style="border: none; margin: 0px 0px 0px 40px; padding: 0px; text-align: left;"><span style="color: #0b5394; font-family: arial;"><span face="Roboto, RobotoDraft, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" style="background-color: white; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 0.25px;">So story board idea using a lot of what you already have.<br /></span></span><span style="color: #0b5394; font-family: arial;"><span face="Roboto, RobotoDraft, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" style="background-color: white; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 0.25px;">1. This is before any camera's get installed and is the first video he sees.<br /></span></span><span style="color: #0b5394; font-family: arial;"><span face="Roboto, RobotoDraft, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" style="background-color: white; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 0.25px;">2. She doesn't say anything just teases him with the video and her body and it doesn't take long till he's close.<br /></span></span><span style="color: #0b5394; font-family: arial;"><span face="Roboto, RobotoDraft, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" style="background-color: white; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 0.25px;">4. She then pauses and it's just as she starts to give Mike a blowjob. Tells him she's never seen him this hard before nor leaking so much precum and he see's her start to masturbate. He see's an opportunity to convince her that she's what turn him on and not what she's doing. She says that's not true, that it's not just her but what she's doing to him. She then tells him Mike's not the first big cock she's sucked, he mumbles about Jim. She ignores this and say nor was Jim. But never until now was she turned on by giving a guy a blow job. It was the fact that she was giving Mike a blowjob while he, her husband and the man she loves, was at home locked up and unable to get any pleasure. That in this part he was the only thing turning her on and now he get's to see he give mike one of the best blowjobs ever because of how turned on her husband made her. He whines about this which causes her to stop masturbating and rebuke him that only his whining is causing her to lose respect for him.<br /></span></span><span style="color: #0b5394; font-family: arial;"><span face="Roboto, RobotoDraft, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" style="background-color: white; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 0.25px;">5, She stops any come back by starting the video and his eye's are drawn to the screen. He tell himself he'll show her by not saying anything or masturbating. However, as if it has a mind of it's own his body takes over and he starts to masturbate and in no time he's close again.<br /></span></span><span style="color: #0b5394; font-family: arial;"><span face="Roboto, RobotoDraft, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" style="background-color: white; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 0.25px;">6. Pause again. She tells him he must love being her cuck because he can't look away and masturbates so hard. After all he could just look at her and not the screen if it was really just about her. He decides to try and just not say anything but vows to himself he'll just keep looking at her.</span></span><div><span style="color: #0b5394; font-family: arial;"><span face="Roboto, RobotoDraft, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" style="background-color: white; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 0.25px;">7. However, just as it resumes he her's a slap and his eyes are immediately drawn to the screen. Distantly he hears her giggle but can't tear himself away as he's seeing his wife worship with her mouth another, larger cock while moaning after each slap. After a little bit of this he's close again and she pauses.</span></span></div><div><span style="color: #0b5394; font-family: arial;"><span face="Roboto, RobotoDraft, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" style="background-color: white; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 0.25px;">8. It's an effort but after a bit he's able to tear his eyes from the screen and back to her. She giggles again seeing his struggle and then starts to masturbate again. He asks her if he'd spank her would she go back to being his again. This time it's less whining and more begging or pleading which turns her on more. She explains that he couldn't as he's not that type of man. He starts to try and say something but she cut's him off. Saying she could never love or be with the type of man who could spank her or dominate her like Mike does. She know from experience loving or being with that type of man comes with more negatives than it's worth and what she's found with him is deeper than just sex after all big dicked dominate guys are a dime a dozen but a man who likes being cucked and is strong enough to let her cuck him is one in a million. She masturbating while saying this turned on by what she's doing to him but he can also see the deep love in her for him in her eyes.</span></span></div><div><span style="color: #0b5394; font-family: arial;"><span face="Roboto, RobotoDraft, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" style="background-color: white; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 0.25px;">9. Seeing her love for him echoed in his eyes she tells him that he can cum on her foot but he has to thank her for cucking him while he does.</span></span></div><div><span style="color: #0b5394; font-family: arial;"><span face="Roboto, RobotoDraft, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" style="background-color: white; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 0.25px;">10. At this point he's lost every argument pushing him further into a submission to her and his fears temporarily put to rest his true desire comes out. He thanks her profusely for cucking him while having the biggest orgasm of his life. She also has a big orgasm as she see's him cum.</span></span></div><div><span style="color: #0b5394; font-family: arial;"><span face="Roboto, RobotoDraft, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" style="background-color: white; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 0.25px;">11. before the come down can start she grabs his attention an tells him if he wants to see more of the video he has to lick his cum off her foot. Which he does and after finishing as he's hitting the low he see's her counting down.</span></span></div><div><span style="color: #0b5394; font-family: arial;"><span face="Roboto, RobotoDraft, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" style="background-color: white; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 0.25px;">12. Then you can have the after care scene you did previously. Give him the chance to stop it if he wants, he doesn't.</span></span></div><div><span style="color: #0b5394; font-family: arial;"><span face="Roboto, RobotoDraft, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" style="background-color: white; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 0.25px;">13.I think for timeline purposes a time skip would work well. Like they keep watching the video while masturbating and she shares what she was thinking/feeling and turned her on. Maybe the next scene is them at the end of the video with some progressions. He's not hesitating about thanking her for cucking him she's masturbating but now maybe wearing loose clothing so he just see her hands moving under her clothes. I don't think you need to show every little step and you included him masturbating with her clothed previously and I thought that was as good place for this to end up.</span></span></div><div><span style="color: #0b5394; font-family: arial;"><span face="Roboto, RobotoDraft, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" style="background-color: white; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 0.25px;">2/2</span></span></div></blockquote><div><br /></div><div> You get to the difficulty with all this in point 13. It's too much in one scene, hitting every cuck thing in one session. If we're time-skipping in and out, like a movie might do, then you can string it out but the tension gets broken with every skip. To be honest, I think you suffer from the exactly the same eat-all-the-sweeties-in-the-bag-all-at-once problem that I do.</div><div>A the end of this scene he's thanking her for cucking him and after that, there's really nowhere to go.</div><div><br /></div><div>Back the the point by point - I don't think she can only enjoy giving blowjobs knowing that Dave is denied - I think she does like sex, it's just better for her if it's kind of slutty. </div><div>On the whining - in what I've written this time around, she never directly rebukes him for whining - it's always Mike. In fact, for her, while nobody likes listening to whining, she knows this is a symptom of the fact that her cucking him is eating him up. If he stopped whining it might meant he was becoming indifferent or inured to it, which wouldn't be a good thing for her. What she worries about is (a) them growing apart because of the cucking - indirectly because he's masturbating alone and (b) Dave and Mike getting into open conflict over her, because of Mike needling and belittling him, which she kind of enjoys in a dommy way, but she's aware - boys will be boys - that this kind of bullying might degenerate into open conflict which she'd have to end by dumping Mike. </div><div>On the spanking - 'I like it but not from a man I love' - agree, but I don't think she'd spell it out so openly. As an aside AprilW9 - also known as AprilWould is a GWA audio performer on reddits GoneWildAudio forum. She has a really great cuckold audio on exactly this theme - <a href="https://www.reddit.com/r/AprilAllTheWay/comments/engeru/repost_the_jerk_off_contest_saga_cuckold_light/">Like to the reddit post</a>, <a href="https://alamopreacher.blogspot.com/2020/05/april-would-aprilw9-aprilalltheway.html">Link to my blogpost about it.</a> </div><div>In it, she says something exactly like this while her bull is spanking her. Strong reccomend.</div><div><br /></div><div>Phew. Anyhow, like I say above, I feel like I've whetted a lot of appetites and I hope I can satisfy them. I'm reluctant to push out much more until I can get a solid set of chapters, even the first four or so, that I'm totally happy with. When I get a chance I'll map out the outlines for each chapter and the first chapters I'm okay with, which may be nearer the middle as I'm finding the beginning the hardest.</div><div><br /></div><div>Thanks for all the comments. I'm very enthused.</div><div>Al.</div><div><blockquote><p><br style="-webkit-tap-highlight-color: transparent; background-color: white; color: #37474f; font-family: Roboto, RobotoDraft, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 0.25px;" /><br style="-webkit-tap-highlight-color: transparent; background-color: white; color: #37474f; font-family: Roboto, RobotoDraft, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 0.25px;" /><br /></p></blockquote><p> </p></div>Alamo Preacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05382309157117039998noreply@blogger.com8tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7500944.post-75395763851820358962023-08-24T00:57:00.006-07:002023-08-24T12:12:07.444-07:00More Cuck Storm Replacement Service.<p> Blogger feels like the worst platform for this stuff. The comment system is atrocious. I think about moving to Medium, but the hassle puts me off. </p><p>Anyway, I got some kind comments, and I wanted to post another excerpt. </p><p>In the meantime - </p><blockquote><p><i><span style="font-size: x-small;"><span face="Roboto, RobotoDraft, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" style="background-color: white; color: #37474f; letter-spacing: 0.25px;">More analysis after a second read. You’ve definitely nailed the tone again and the goal of making the cuckolding more indirect to keep it inline with the books was accomplished. I also liked the story about Mike’s past. It gives more context about why he is the person he is and also plays to the “mommy” theme that was very prevalent in the first two books. It also brings to mind the “Alfie” dog story Dave tells in the first book.</span><br style="-webkit-tap-highlight-color: transparent; background-color: white; color: #37474f; font-family: Roboto, RobotoDraft, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; letter-spacing: 0.25px;" /><br style="-webkit-tap-highlight-color: transparent; background-color: white; color: #37474f; font-family: Roboto, RobotoDraft, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; letter-spacing: 0.25px;" /><span face="Roboto, RobotoDraft, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" style="background-color: white; color: #37474f; letter-spacing: 0.25px;">The excerpt feels much more connected to the first two books and I can tell how much your analysis has helped. Your point about the main storyline is well made and I’m wondering if there even needed to be a fourth book like was initially announced. It seems like there wouldn’t be enough material unless the original author planned on creating some arbitrary drama like many of the big genre authors tend to do. The author reminds me a bit of the director Michael Bay in a way. He made some good movies but doesn’t actually understand why those movies were considered good nor how to replicate that success in his other work. Like Bay, I don’t think the original author has any idea why his first two books were successful. It’s very possible that you have a better understanding of his work then he ever did.</span></span></i></p></blockquote><p>I don't know about tone. McManus is able to write Dave's inner monologue so well. It feels like you're inside his head. I keep going back to action and dialogue. And my stuff is so wordy. </p><p>I'd totally forgotten about the fat kid and Alfie. That whole sequence in the beach house is so well done. Nothing actually happens but Dave works himself into a total lather in 24 hours. If I'd written that, there would have been an orgy in the hot tub in the first hour.</p><p>In my view of Mike, which I haven't really worked into the story much, he is all about domination of other men. He sees sex almost exclusively as a power trip. He doesn't want single women. he only gets off on the power of humiliating other men. There's more of this in other chapters. The childhood story is true, the key point being that he says he didn't bully the other kid, but he did. </p><p>I doubt I have a better understanding of what makes the original two books so good. I certainly can't recreate them. He's able to paint the light and shade very well. I think the problem with the story is the same problem for all cuckold stories. The start is always the best part and after the very first scene, it's all epilogue. </p><p>Cuckolding is a wife going with another man. Once it's happened, it's all repetition. Sure, you can spice it up, escalate it, but the vital 'Oh God, No. Why do I like this?' moment is essentially a once-off, and you're chasing that high for the rest of the book. Sequels even more so. </p><p>All that said, here's a spicing-it-up excerpt from earlier than the other one. I've lest in my own notes and stuff at the top. [doorman] means I can't remember his name and I have to go back and fix it later. </p><p><a href="https://drive.google.com/file/d/1V_AmIqOT7uKHoMbLMTBVWsX9rBq7i_UO/view?usp=sharing" target="_blank">Another Extract</a></p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhmfnIVXBa4YPph2AG8VJaRhp9XvDqr_apsH4c2Ii7KOJ3DndKTDiDu6nIbDSrSX2x545SmrqDuMMnQSCslQnO-3UKTBZxIg84CQVlzWWGG6Ljc5Mu9MAdOIOuRNP17Ar5IF6iGHggwlTR08HbgarIcHAGSKg496cXaJ6g-JY1twWsa0ScXtSid/s1800/338409994_753634772976875_4477357946431271524_n.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="1800" data-original-width="1440" height="640" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhmfnIVXBa4YPph2AG8VJaRhp9XvDqr_apsH4c2Ii7KOJ3DndKTDiDu6nIbDSrSX2x545SmrqDuMMnQSCslQnO-3UKTBZxIg84CQVlzWWGG6Ljc5Mu9MAdOIOuRNP17Ar5IF6iGHggwlTR08HbgarIcHAGSKg496cXaJ6g-JY1twWsa0ScXtSid/w512-h640/338409994_753634772976875_4477357946431271524_n.jpg" width="512" /></a></div><p>This is roughly two thirds of the way through. As you'll read, Ashley has been increasingly closing down his masturbation. She's going to a work function of Mike's as Mike's date and will be staying over at a hotel. Is this too much? This 'NoFap' storyline is the main Dave-Ashley interaction. The other main one is the Dave-Mike humiliation one where Mike increasingly engineers situations where he can humble Dave. </p><p>The intention is that this scene flows into Ashley encouraging him to masturbate in front of her, using audio and video of her and Mike together as a lure. That still feels like too much too fast. I haven't written that bit yet, and I'm leaning toward Dave refusing to go along with it but I don't know what that does to the story. </p><p>Input much appreciated.</p><p>If you don't want to struggle with comments, alamopreacher@gmail.com will reach me.</p>Alamo Preacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05382309157117039998noreply@blogger.com10tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7500944.post-83344252387980145632023-08-22T23:19:00.001-07:002023-08-24T01:00:11.549-07:00Cuck Storm Replacment : Attempt two<p> A while ago I made an attempt to write the third book in David McManus's Reluctant Cuckold series.</p><p>I say attempt, because while I enjoyed writing it, and I got a lot of good feedback, I didn't think it was all that good and eventually it ran into the sand. I made a few attempts to 'fix' it, I never felt I was getting anywhere and I abandoned the effort.</p><p>Well, it ate away at me. I kept returning to re-read "Reluctant" and "Horizon" and appreciate them more and more. </p><p>Here's the things I thought were wrong with my attempt, in no particular order.</p><p></p><ul style="text-align: left;"><li>It moved way too fast. Ten chapters took place over a couple of days.</li><li>I went straight from explicit sex scene to sex scene too rapidly.</li><li>I didn't get enough of Dave's internal monologue and retrospection in, which is a hallmark of the originals.</li><li>I didn't do enough fantasising. Some of the best passages in the originals take place in Dave's head.</li><li>There's very little face-to-face time with Mike. Mike humiliating Dave directly are also really good scenes, but I shied away from these.</li><li>Ashley and Dave get super explicit about femdom, cuckolding and FLR straight away. The glancing-off-it unstated nature of the originals is lost almost immediately.</li></ul><div>For me, the key point in the originals come after Ashley invites Mike back and they close the door on Dave. </div><div>When Mike says <span style="font-family: Charter;"><i>“I think we’re going to have a little private time now.” </i>That's the point that a good book gets really very good. What makes it even better is that there's almost no explict sex that evening. They turn the music up too loud. It's all in Dave's head.</span></div><div><span style="font-family: Charter;"><br /></span></div><div><span style="font-family: Charter;">Amazingly, McManus pulls this off again in the second book. </span></div><blockquote style="border: none; margin: 0px 0px 0px 40px; padding: 0px;"><div style="text-align: left;"><i style="font-family: "Minion Pro";">“Dave,” she said, “I think we’re going to retire now, okay?”</i></div></blockquote><blockquote style="border: none; margin: 0px 0px 0px 40px; padding: 0px; text-align: left;"><p class="p1" style="font-family: "Minion Pro"; font-feature-settings: normal; font-kerning: auto; font-optical-sizing: auto; font-stretch: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variation-settings: normal; line-height: normal; margin: 0px;"><i>“You’re going to bed?” I said.</i></p><div><i><span style="font-family: "Minion Pro";">“Yeah, we’re going to the bedroom now, okay?”</span><span style="font-family: Charter;"> </span></i></div><div><i></i></div></blockquote><p>If anything, this is even better. These exchanges work so well because McManus has done so much work leading up to these scenes and he's been so subtle in painting the relationship between Ashley and Dave. </p><p>To try to get more familiar with the spirit of the originals, I did a couple of things. First, I made an index for the first two books. Here's an excerpt. I wanted to count and see where these topics came up. There's three pages of this.</p><div><br /></div><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjUgKmdDxQjLkhIRY2aC6z3L1JhoApgSzTWCfoa0Dbyg5q6DeJObpwPsaqBjpprLaUKOhqBF637e2AJYaq5Q4TjfB0SjWW698ORdALhFO8D3s-bocnuddlVxsQNkYoxtf3Z_QpHUdCL9ztQliWEERKaTvbvQhymaeJZB9MFxyHeDBSzfH5W7Xtj/s1193/Screenshot%202023-07-17%20at%2006.03.32.png" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="1193" data-original-width="1111" height="640" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjUgKmdDxQjLkhIRY2aC6z3L1JhoApgSzTWCfoa0Dbyg5q6DeJObpwPsaqBjpprLaUKOhqBF637e2AJYaq5Q4TjfB0SjWW698ORdALhFO8D3s-bocnuddlVxsQNkYoxtf3Z_QpHUdCL9ztQliWEERKaTvbvQhymaeJZB9MFxyHeDBSzfH5W7Xtj/w597-h640/Screenshot%202023-07-17%20at%2006.03.32.png" title="Sarah Evaliina" width="597" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"><i>I used Sarah Evaliina to illustrate.</i></td></tr></tbody></table><br /><div><div>Then I made a time-line. How much time passes between events. In the originals, future events - Ashley going out with Mike, them meeting up etc. are flagged in advance which makes the book flow better. </div></div><div><br /></div><div>And while I did those, I wrote short summaries of each chapter in the first two books.</div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEif7dmoHv1CC8vBNRxmZblRKMB8N2ChLF2NTaAOSb7oNCxtPSGsgxMe5Y39lsS-1v02wnbDr7PYWpwA5SCuE-u5bZrYQgJJpXBlNJYolyl85twMR7ZC1hcVDMLO-DNXKcYCTsUS76C1NzC5JKR6CyHkcT1iXYS8m-5lsbU6u8OSI5h3esT3aysy/s919/Screenshot%202023-08-22%20at%2010.03.50.png" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="919" data-original-width="869" height="640" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEif7dmoHv1CC8vBNRxmZblRKMB8N2ChLF2NTaAOSb7oNCxtPSGsgxMe5Y39lsS-1v02wnbDr7PYWpwA5SCuE-u5bZrYQgJJpXBlNJYolyl85twMR7ZC1hcVDMLO-DNXKcYCTsUS76C1NzC5JKR6CyHkcT1iXYS8m-5lsbU6u8OSI5h3esT3aysy/w606-h640/Screenshot%202023-08-22%20at%2010.03.50.png" width="606" /></a></div><br /><div><br /></div><div>In short, I took it all apart to see how it ticked.</div><div><br /></div><div>During previous rewrite attempts, I'd written some passages which I liked, and now I'd written more, but they weren't linked together. So, I tried to write some sort of structure for the book to hang them in and try to avoid the pitfalls that I'd repeatedly fallen into.</div><div><br /></div><div>As a hobby, do-it-for-the-fun-of-it kind of writer, I never think about structure. I just sit down, start writing and see where it goes. Obviously, this is bad. All my bad habits and foibles have free reign and get amplified by this stream-of-bullshit way of writing. </div><div><br /></div><div>I think Hemmingway said that writing is easy. You just sit at your typewriter and bleed onto the page. In short, it's hard work, and it's painful. </div><div><br /></div><div>My hardest challenge in all this was keeping away from the incredible gravitational pull of Dave and Ashley talking explicitly about what's going on. Dom-female to Sub-male dialog is my catnip. But in the originals, this never happens. They glance off each other. Discussions are not explicit. Things are left unsaid. Nothing ever concludes. </div><div><br /></div><div>In my first attempted rewrite, I broke this rule straight away. Ashley makes Dave say that he is her cuck in chapter two. She then makes him jerk off onto her foot. And from there on, the relationship is irrevocably changed. Now, I liked writing that chapter. Readers said it was hot. But if Bruce Willis and Sybil Sheppard had got it on in the first episode of Moonlighting, then nobody would have watched episode two.</div><div><br /></div><div>I had to keep more of this unsaid. More meaningful silences. More talking at cross-purposes. More ambiguity.</div><div><br /></div><div>But of course, it's hard to keep that believable, given all that's happened in the first two books.</div><div><br /></div><div>There is an idea of fiction of rising and falling action, with each cycle getting faster and more heightened until a c<span style="font-family: times;">risis, and th</span>en denouement. I wanted to follow this idea, which I think is present in the originals. In the originals they meet up with friends, or we hear a lot about Dave's work, or they spend time doing couple stuff together. In fact, that's two thirds of the books. It's not sex-scene to sex-scene to sex scene. I tried hard to make these parts interesting. </div><div><br /></div><div>I have to admit that on my first read-through of Reluctant and Horizon, I kinda fast-forwarded through all the scenes in Dave's work or the going-out-as-couples with their friends. But these scenes are essential to the tone and pacing of the book.</div><div><br /></div><div>Also, there is an idea of a story's plot, the main storyline, and sub-plots which contrast with the main storyline and give more substance.</div><div><br /></div><div>For me, the main storyline is Dave and Ashley's relationship. His reluctance to accept that he is a cuckold, and her grinding away at his resistance - the final crisis being his acceptance, maybe even embracing of the lifestyle.</div><div><br /></div><div>The subplots are Mike and Dave sparring off each other, and (continuing from the original) Dave's failures and victories in his workplace.</div><div><br /></div><div>That main storyline is hard to keep in check. When I re-read Reluctant and Horizon, it's surprising just how dominant Ashley is. Early in Horizon she makes him enter chastity, but it's all done so carefully that it doesn't feel forced. When I wrote equivalent scenes, they felt like a slam in the face. I tried hard to work on the tone, less jump-scare, more rising dread for David.</div><div><br /></div><div>Finally, I decided the answers to some key questions I felt I had to have clarity on. Here's a few examples.</div><div><p class="p1" style="font-feature-settings: normal; font-kerning: auto; font-optical-sizing: auto; font-stretch: normal; font-variant-alternates: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variation-settings: normal; line-height: normal; margin: 6px 0px 0px;"></p><ul style="text-align: left;"><li><span style="font-family: times;">Does Ashley actually <i>want</i> him to watch?</span></li><li><span style="font-family: times;">Why hasn't she invited him to?</span></li><li><span style="font-family: times;">Can she be with someone else? Jim? Mike jealousy?</span></li><li><span style="font-family: times; text-indent: -28px;">The 'submissive' tee shirt party</span><span class="Apple-converted-space" style="font-family: times; text-indent: -28px;"> </span><span style="font-family: times; text-indent: -28px;">- what happened?</span></li><li><span style="font-family: times;">Did Ashley go to Mike’s after US Open?</span></li><li><span style="font-family: times;">Was there someone before Murta?</span></li><li><span style="font-family: times;">Has Tamara met Mike</span></li></ul><p></p></div><div><span style="font-family: times;">I've written about as many words now as there is in either Horizon or Reluctant. But, I know I'm going to dump up to half of it, and I still have a lot of 'connective tissue' to write.</span></div><div><span style="font-family: times;">I'm still actively working on it and there's no part I'm 100% happy with.</span></div><div><span style="font-family: times;"><br /></span></div><div><span style="font-family: times;">In the meantime, here's an excerpt, a part I like and will keep in the final version to some degree.</span></div><div><span style="font-family: times;"><br /></span></div><div><span style="font-family: times;">The context for this is - it's later in the story - in the second half. Ashley has started to forbid Dave to masturbate for periods. Mike is about to go away on a business trip. Dave is determined to make the most of the Mike-free time. He's bought her a fancy lingerie set, intending to give it to her once Mike is gone but she sees the bag and he can't resist giving it to her early. Then he has to go to a bar to meet Mike and bring him back later. Ashley wants them to be friends.</span></div><div><span style="font-family: times;"><a href="https://drive.google.com/file/d/1R4mK8hl6Z2Jc8oXEd81WH1SvWSq_Hgds/view?usp=sharing" target="_blank">PDF Sample</a><br /></span></div><div><br /></div><div>Some people have commented or emailed encouragement to work on this. Thank you all so much. It really does help to give me momentum. </div><div>Some people suggested a tip jar or something like that. No need. To be clear, I'm never going to sell this. It's too close to the original author's work and it wouldn't be right to charge for it.</div><div>When I have a draft I feel is okay I'll make it available here for free. </div><div><span style="font-family: times;"><br /></span></div><div><span style="font-family: times;"><br /></span></div><div><br /></div><div><span style="font-family: times;"><br /></span></div><div><br /></div><p></p>Alamo Preacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05382309157117039998noreply@blogger.com5tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7500944.post-29770298511767562652023-04-27T23:03:00.004-07:002023-04-27T23:04:23.203-07:00CuringHis Size Anxiety<p> </p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEj_KSIorbmeScYizOy4Aq1UkS2B5Y3w95KtfHoMFeG7xqMcUCgO49v3O_APfM6MmXeyH5yMX1CR0sxKPAB5PJT3BTEuOZpzcCXi7ceUbdOyZDv6nuN8d3SkuMRERJjvCOd2HzEbxHgkUmopAmsqNJa3Cz1e6anm0Ki7LzrsVtSh4ZKMeWR0sg/s2083/CuringHisSizeAnxiety.png" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="1667" data-original-width="2083" height="512" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEj_KSIorbmeScYizOy4Aq1UkS2B5Y3w95KtfHoMFeG7xqMcUCgO49v3O_APfM6MmXeyH5yMX1CR0sxKPAB5PJT3BTEuOZpzcCXi7ceUbdOyZDv6nuN8d3SkuMRERJjvCOd2HzEbxHgkUmopAmsqNJa3Cz1e6anm0Ki7LzrsVtSh4ZKMeWR0sg/w640-h512/CuringHisSizeAnxiety.png" width="640" /></a></div><br /><p></p>Alamo Preacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05382309157117039998noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7500944.post-88148766084718749422023-04-26T04:21:00.002-07:002023-04-26T04:21:16.349-07:00Boys. A user's guide.<p></p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjjsuaMo0DMBMZRRYF-SlV9Ul-G1jtxPQA-iX4rgpt-8vB3mVtg0onlFtdrAHhXXY0dk9UxOPhASz_c1vvaKWHkO516OdpWct2DcJhP1XLfc4DetUVazpfUm_88G-FA08hJKwozEOQ2lwF3UfCb7OCeOVsXzROYDFe6n5TnZctJPd_uB2oMBA/s1754/BoysAUsersGuide.png" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="1240" data-original-width="1754" height="452" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjjsuaMo0DMBMZRRYF-SlV9Ul-G1jtxPQA-iX4rgpt-8vB3mVtg0onlFtdrAHhXXY0dk9UxOPhASz_c1vvaKWHkO516OdpWct2DcJhP1XLfc4DetUVazpfUm_88G-FA08hJKwozEOQ2lwF3UfCb7OCeOVsXzROYDFe6n5TnZctJPd_uB2oMBA/w640-h452/BoysAUsersGuide.png" width="640" /></a></div><br /> <p></p>Alamo Preacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05382309157117039998noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7500944.post-3097875854287400422023-04-20T09:02:00.005-07:002023-04-20T09:02:47.730-07:00When Is It Okay To Jerk Off?<p> </p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; 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Not a PMV, more a kind of comic/cartoon story thing.<p></p><p>A while ago I started seeing video clips with a cartoon filter, like the one on the left. I liked these a lot, but I didn't know what had created them and I tried to get a similar effect using After Effect's cartoon filter. The results weren't good but I noodled about with making an animated cuckold cartoon. I didn't like the overall effect though and I abandoned it ... <i>until ...</i> I saw that the filter was from an app called prequel. </p><p>I downloaded it onto my phone and tried it on some clips. Very, very nice. The only problem was that it's only available on phones and I could find no equivalent plugin. </p><p>But i was so pleased with it that I started a new cuckold animated comic thing, painstakingly selecting clips. moving them to the phone, applying the filter, saving and moving them back.</p><p>But I really, really liked the effect. </p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEiXjDZNXZXrNYfHKQZQKXZR3Y4Nr7wBMeuymXztj6thUhD5w4yFHDqRFpGzhBD_acSQmxOOGwORXRgaKcW3RnHfVugLk5cOtQK86DeTV7-_ulgSAGcvZaV_Eb63SsOUg8lR5hS3R1o0dEsOkvx0l_ZjCEzarxwwpUwBVibG2Ndqi9uN2YUpJw/s600/ezgif-5-b7049f487f.gif" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="338" data-original-width="600" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEiXjDZNXZXrNYfHKQZQKXZR3Y4Nr7wBMeuymXztj6thUhD5w4yFHDqRFpGzhBD_acSQmxOOGwORXRgaKcW3RnHfVugLk5cOtQK86DeTV7-_ulgSAGcvZaV_Eb63SsOUg8lR5hS3R1o0dEsOkvx0l_ZjCEzarxwwpUwBVibG2Ndqi9uN2YUpJw/s16000/ezgif-5-b7049f487f.gif" /></a></div><br /></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><br /></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;">To begin with, I made pretty basic 'pages'. When I was noodling around I'd tried to animate the frames themselves and that was (a) massively fiddly and (b) confusing to read. So I kept it pretty simple.</div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;">Initially, I'd made actual pages, which flipped over, but I abandoned this too, making parts more like scenes which moved the story along.</div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;"><br /></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;">For the (very tropey) story - man visits domme, develops cucky fantasies, admits it all to his wife, turns out she's cucking him all along - I intercut the scenes with his wife with ones with Crystal Knight - the domme. For those, there are only clips of crystal staring down the viewer, usually full-screen.</div><br /><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;"><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgJu8oARnsf_tt650H3TlxUev-ho_Fa2cNjN8qJ5C5AJ4uCPPwMVwJ_OEyJGupMKp9nET0cX5wtJIDswuSYGqg3hYYD1HlKrY87xZzwxlk-6-dqTF6_eBJKshveEbqcbBsx_Z2M-x2Jtf_FQOQWq6pVNyaT36sOvG1uXR838_x4_vuiCObjXg/s600/chap3-small.gif" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em; text-align: center;"><img border="0" data-original-height="338" data-original-width="600" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgJu8oARnsf_tt650H3TlxUev-ho_Fa2cNjN8qJ5C5AJ4uCPPwMVwJ_OEyJGupMKp9nET0cX5wtJIDswuSYGqg3hYYD1HlKrY87xZzwxlk-6-dqTF6_eBJKshveEbqcbBsx_Z2M-x2Jtf_FQOQWq6pVNyaT36sOvG1uXR838_x4_vuiCObjXg/s16000/chap3-small.gif" /></a></div><br /></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;">But for the scenes with Kimber, I needed more than just sex. I had to have some talky scenes and ones where she interacts more-or-less normally. That was why I'd chosen Kimber, because I had several such scenes with her. In retrospect, although Kimber is lovely, if I was doing this again I'd go with one of the stars from MyWifeIsMyPornstar, ideally one who did a HouseWife 1 on 1. Allie Haze springs to mind.</div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;"><br /></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;">That's not to diss Kimber, who is outstanding and amazingly pretty but I found myself hunting for more scenes rather than having to re-use the couple of minutes of footage I had.</div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;"><br /></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;">Since I'd been concentrating so hard on getting clips and moments from the stock I had, I just let the story wander along as I usually do. Scene suggests text which suggests next scene and on and on. Being able to switch between Kimber and Crystal was great as I could make the story develop without having to make everything match up. Also, variety. </div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;"><br /></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;"><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgMG5WZ9POPzuIHv3B7o5Mmzk_Nz6tn5oXs3TTzt12YTSLyFVoXSiMUZuyZgm_nH4-b72t53mrrb3cOUrlovsE0VSIkBmfGdSh-2dsg8sdozX3ttT_KL5rD23xSNsgDrdntv2beWo7ef6O6wSpIhxZZyGnvolIsnVm_vXUQwIadt_AM_9oPQg/s600/ezgif-5-dbafd493ce.gif" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em; text-align: center;"><img border="0" data-original-height="338" data-original-width="600" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgMG5WZ9POPzuIHv3B7o5Mmzk_Nz6tn5oXs3TTzt12YTSLyFVoXSiMUZuyZgm_nH4-b72t53mrrb3cOUrlovsE0VSIkBmfGdSh-2dsg8sdozX3ttT_KL5rD23xSNsgDrdntv2beWo7ef6O6wSpIhxZZyGnvolIsnVm_vXUQwIadt_AM_9oPQg/s16000/ezgif-5-dbafd493ce.gif" /></a></div><br /></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;">At the start I'd assumed all this would be silent, but as I moved into the sec scenes I felt it would be better to have those scenes with some kind of moaning sex from the actual scene. Which meant music for the rest. Obviously having dialog and lip movements match was impossible but I reckoned the viewer would be able to just ignore that. In any case, the text is mostly narration. But with the Crystal scenes - where she's playing a Domme, encouraging our hero to be a cuck, well, half of her stuff is exactly that. So it was too tempting to take some sections of her speech and incorporate them. I tried not to do this too directly, as I wouldn't be able to make it work for the whole story and then it would be confusing. </div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;"><br /></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;">But adding sound was a new burden on editing and sine I hadn't done this from the start I had to go back and fill in more. Plus. while I'd just let some low-key techno be the background, if the sound was more of a thing, now I wanted to make sections match the mood of the piece, emphasise the impact of scenes and play more of a part like a PMV. </div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;"><br /></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEj_ask7Why5rNDP9505wzhs_ArJL8fWGrWUaqNOr-bRd_bhkAkQo6NhGYJGvvWwoa-F8C27LZDKOYTaNA41o8a9-G_mnMZyFLqVadDTK1CjfIk2L20TGJnz66gdHvDK-FP3etH4YC-j2mDIcxxUXtgyUsKTkBy9gY_9R6SkysaGNe0yhoNThQ/s600/chap5-small.gif" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="338" data-original-width="600" height="360" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEj_ask7Why5rNDP9505wzhs_ArJL8fWGrWUaqNOr-bRd_bhkAkQo6NhGYJGvvWwoa-F8C27LZDKOYTaNA41o8a9-G_mnMZyFLqVadDTK1CjfIk2L20TGJnz66gdHvDK-FP3etH4YC-j2mDIcxxUXtgyUsKTkBy9gY_9R6SkysaGNe0yhoNThQ/w640-h360/chap5-small.gif" width="640" /></a></div><br /><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;">In truth though, the real difficulty was the text and video matching. text requires time to read before the next piece appears, and some time needs to remain to appreciate each visual element too. Ideally, these line up in a logical flow, hopefully adding impact to the text with the visuals. So I'd estimate that 50% of the editing time had been spent adjusting the timing and length of text, slowing or speeding up visuals to make them match and moving text around the screen so the viewers eye can follow it logically, but it doesn't obscure important parts of the visual. Plus, to keep some of the original comic book panel style I didn't want to just blat out screen-filling video and plonk text on it. I wanted insets and transitions which were visually interesting and added to the scene. Hours were lost fiddling with boxes and speed ramps and animation to make this work and inevitable compromises had to be made.</div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;"> </div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;">So why do it? Because for some reason, I think the comic-art effect makes the visual better somehow. It's hrd to explain, but somehow those clean lines and smooth tones make it all sexier. If I'd done exactly this with the original, non-filtered video it would look okay, but it wouldn't pop like it does. That's partly because I like these kind of cucky stories and having the text boxes and panel-style art makes it work as familiar format. Making each scene feels very satisfying and I'm really making these things just for myself. </div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgVafJpCloP49WibbAyPCp1kPj7RtljunRWjBa3OYVWrvF1fCwU_O82hLD4n9Y8ntZ_2lhtx9ZTGhrGrILXDxYXXncAkYOwDz-00hcZeDp9x70bJ_ey5tX0ymXvvMdqpgNCwdPj_T2LM-7DGhNvdM3KdEMuRtw8jglKSNVhXhOzY-MGwDcWSA/s600/chap6-small.gif" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="338" data-original-width="600" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgVafJpCloP49WibbAyPCp1kPj7RtljunRWjBa3OYVWrvF1fCwU_O82hLD4n9Y8ntZ_2lhtx9ZTGhrGrILXDxYXXncAkYOwDz-00hcZeDp9x70bJ_ey5tX0ymXvvMdqpgNCwdPj_T2LM-7DGhNvdM3KdEMuRtw8jglKSNVhXhOzY-MGwDcWSA/s16000/chap6-small.gif" /></a></div><br /><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;"><br /></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;">Back to the story. This is the kind of thing that I've landed on now. Kimber is casually cruel but there's always a possibility that she really loves our hero. She knows this is what he wants and she's happy to give it to him. She's never going to leave him. In fact, she goes to a lot of trouble to make him happy, even though that means being incredibly mean to him, cucking and humiliating him. </div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;"><br /></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;">His sessions with Crystal and his memories of them make it a bit fresher than the standard cuck story and being able to match text with images so exactly is kind of what makes it fun. I learned a new respect for those layout and lettering people you see in comic credits. Positioning the text so it fits well with the images is damn tricky.</div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjzEQ29jxh-3UsZDrCkmBZ1UZKL2v0tvSqPRvs-DnuOjZ4cq7FcrkmzeSUnTIwXiha7IS9WfpsYzcRHjC0sx3Udl3dKFbklpquX0feBfbse03vcAizeZrCHERgOgWrDNW2bwMb_jBsbO_e8wnuDZnCLXluCJY4ZLk6cg0ytLb8UWrfZ0yU50w/s600/chap8-small.gif" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="400" data-original-width="600" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjzEQ29jxh-3UsZDrCkmBZ1UZKL2v0tvSqPRvs-DnuOjZ4cq7FcrkmzeSUnTIwXiha7IS9WfpsYzcRHjC0sx3Udl3dKFbklpquX0feBfbse03vcAizeZrCHERgOgWrDNW2bwMb_jBsbO_e8wnuDZnCLXluCJY4ZLk6cg0ytLb8UWrfZ0yU50w/s16000/chap8-small.gif" /></a></div><br /><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;"><br /></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;">To be honest, it all got a bit out of control. I was at 20 minutes duration with no denouement in sight, partly due to me going back and adding more into the earlier sections as ideas struck me and I found more suitable clips. </div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;">I hope I didn't take too much of a cop out at the end. I've always preferred a happy-ever-after ending and I think going further would just have been more repetition. </div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;"><br /></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;">If I go again, I want to find sources where the star has done as many interviews as possible - need scenes of her talking to camera. Eye-to-camera sex scenes, and ideally some femdom scenes too. There's probably a few stars who've done that. AJ Applegate maybe. Or maybe Allie Haze, especially as she's got three of those MWMP videos.</div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgBSmsWWoAJI4TJOXrkp0b8wtuJpfbpzHMJXm80Y5u9jfh6CQUns2c7sgO0Oz1Yd6RhJocjxu_yU1GMFhoClvpJ_aQkBWmwGPGYv6ASvwtcsfGMR3tBNdWQMAfpl5yuSPssPF3k2sSpHci5AsHqU-9rA8BFbHY5XW19BxM0_hCWoFYmEz66AA/s600/chap9-small.gif" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="400" data-original-width="600" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgBSmsWWoAJI4TJOXrkp0b8wtuJpfbpzHMJXm80Y5u9jfh6CQUns2c7sgO0Oz1Yd6RhJocjxu_yU1GMFhoClvpJ_aQkBWmwGPGYv6ASvwtcsfGMR3tBNdWQMAfpl5yuSPssPF3k2sSpHci5AsHqU-9rA8BFbHY5XW19BxM0_hCWoFYmEz66AA/s16000/chap9-small.gif" /></a></div><br /><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;"><br /></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;">The story leads inevitable to a scene with Kimber and her boyfriend where our hero gets to watch. As usual, there's places the story could go afterwards but these are never quite as satisfying as the build-up. So I just ended it there, with our hero ind of blissed out by the whole experience. I don't really see myself going back to it.</div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;"><br /></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;">I did, however, start on a new one in the same vein with Emma Lux in the domme role (though in this case she's our hero's bitchy sister-in-law) and Eva Lovia in the wife role. Eva has loads of scenes from Naughty America and Digital playground with a several-minute long setup which can be easily adapated for the talky and normal-life scenes. Plus, she did a whole bunch of interviews which are great. Who knows if I'll finish this, but I'm four-for-four so far on Eva Lovia PMV completion so who knows.</div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><br /></div><br /><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEi3m21J6P_Y8_TuQuPOigc8WJNS2WbxFnq4dTRhyc_mxLPFxiOuPsGGMfed6Ta0DosWtrourDPPsK2NY49JdTxfc6-sUc8UfmteX5F8__W-FD88xFD1p6RzmqneWrKc1bzZOFs77BssmkQpQ75M-_-Q3H8N3hknOWyLe3LdGGeWjRNM9YUIBw/s600/chap2-small.gif" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="338" data-original-width="600" height="360" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEi3m21J6P_Y8_TuQuPOigc8WJNS2WbxFnq4dTRhyc_mxLPFxiOuPsGGMfed6Ta0DosWtrourDPPsK2NY49JdTxfc6-sUc8UfmteX5F8__W-FD88xFD1p6RzmqneWrKc1bzZOFs77BssmkQpQ75M-_-Q3H8N3hknOWyLe3LdGGeWjRNM9YUIBw/w640-h360/chap2-small.gif" width="640" /></a></div><br />Alamo Preacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05382309157117039998noreply@blogger.com6tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7500944.post-4244464597902202702023-02-15T14:28:00.002-08:002023-02-15T14:28:14.877-08:00Spoiled Brat Magazine.<p></p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjLRPJIYRUGmgrHj1M5fOH7hUJy0Vk-aNRfYk6uMp4TCNEyzcMsNNCQ0kQSrw41A2DrYHJrNB0qRwR0Ppaqu5QQwRTUqVUQZhTrBhJQfzR-YTb1GQfK2bzROS4LhpUlm4mFAepGFxWjVMUcaYMa3BdJui5qcovUSO9_L5WNrPq0dOKAXkQy9Q/s1700/spiled%20brat%20magazine.png" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="1700" data-original-width="1280" height="640" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjLRPJIYRUGmgrHj1M5fOH7hUJy0Vk-aNRfYk6uMp4TCNEyzcMsNNCQ0kQSrw41A2DrYHJrNB0qRwR0Ppaqu5QQwRTUqVUQZhTrBhJQfzR-YTb1GQfK2bzROS4LhpUlm4mFAepGFxWjVMUcaYMa3BdJui5qcovUSO9_L5WNrPq0dOKAXkQy9Q/w482-h640/spiled%20brat%20magazine.png" width="482" /></a></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">I just get it for the pictures.</div><br /> <p></p>Alamo Preacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05382309157117039998noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7500944.post-18400791694887318822022-11-02T01:15:00.006-07:002022-11-02T03:34:34.642-07:00Crystal Knight. Yet More Appreciation<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgZp68iwhbqw9rMPf0RZ1Tvxmj3BZvy5c8F87hiJkeJ3TOF-MSfB1vf1KIZngEV1j1-JxZ54h07NIgNOaH7IoEDXgyh5wIP04yLrt8lYNbIqg8jaGbEW3fEKW0T4Qnd4JdCRlsTVmT9GkuZAMHsMsS8TKTEIfmCHfF_qQRTogrek0oJizgvbA/s3840/3840x2160_0fc82744956620b524814ae963f617e7.jpeg" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="2160" data-original-width="3840" height="360" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgZp68iwhbqw9rMPf0RZ1Tvxmj3BZvy5c8F87hiJkeJ3TOF-MSfB1vf1KIZngEV1j1-JxZ54h07NIgNOaH7IoEDXgyh5wIP04yLrt8lYNbIqg8jaGbEW3fEKW0T4Qnd4JdCRlsTVmT9GkuZAMHsMsS8TKTEIfmCHfF_qQRTogrek0oJizgvbA/w640-h360/3840x2160_0fc82744956620b524814ae963f617e7.jpeg" width="640" /></a></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><br /></div><p><b><span style="font-size: x-large;">Crystal Knight, yet more appreciation</span></b></p><p>My usual pornstar obsession waxes and wanes. There's an initial rush of enthusiasm and euphoria. She's amazing! She's perfect! Find everything she's ever done! Then it fades, sometimes down to a confused, "What did I ever see in her?". At least that's how it goes for me, probably evidence of my low character. </p><p></p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhFTFW1vrZzZOLrI91UuLs60cJbRhtcZjo3LtF_96XPwCdqw7iXYMbPW04yIOg5udU-yOHlRY_fC4TkvQYmFG9NagEpNZtKAerK2OIVEPcsH1hKQVzHeqYa4_05Fo4Qh46w4u61qkI8HEcc3LlCsY2BXee3rMnSi0qW6vMMoxrNaid-DxRqdQ/s954/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2020.03.13.png" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="954" data-original-width="711" height="320" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhFTFW1vrZzZOLrI91UuLs60cJbRhtcZjo3LtF_96XPwCdqw7iXYMbPW04yIOg5udU-yOHlRY_fC4TkvQYmFG9NagEpNZtKAerK2OIVEPcsH1hKQVzHeqYa4_05Fo4Qh46w4u61qkI8HEcc3LlCsY2BXee3rMnSi0qW6vMMoxrNaid-DxRqdQ/s320/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2020.03.13.png" width="238" /></a></div>But with some stars it's different. The obsession waxes, wanes and then waxes the fuck back up again. "OhMiGod, how did I not see that she's <i><span style="font-size: medium;">this</span></i> good?" Over and over again. As the amazing Crystal Knight says, "Caught in the endless cycle."<p></p><p>I already wrote a long, rambling appreciation of Crystal back in 2021. Go read it <a href="https://alamopreacher.blogspot.com/2021/12/crystal-knight-appreciation.html">here</a>. In that, I tried to spell out what makes her so different and so good at her craft. </p><p>What was missing from that piece, was a recounting of her evolution over the five years she's been releasing material. The Crystal of 2022 is very different to the Crystal of 2017 and between those dates there have been many other Crystals. Styles, looks, content, formats, tones have been added or altered. In truth, her evolution has been more like the development of a myriad of personas and styles that she adopts, perfects, and then discards as she pleases.</p><p>I have nearly 300 of her videos, a little over ten percent of the 2,863 that she currently has on IWantClips. Obviously, I've chosen ones I like, so it's not a perfectly representative sample, but I have enough, and spread over her career to date, to be able to identify the broadly different phases she's gone through. </p><div>There's two aspects to these phases, the physical and the performative. Crystal has changed her appearance many times. Not just her hair and makeup - I think she's had surgery on her face and body more than once. She looks quite different now than when she started, although she's always been stunningly beautiful. At the same time, she's changed how she makes the videos and the content of them. Her manner changes, her vocabulary, her tone of voice. How she moves, how she sits or stands, or the backdrop where she films.<div><br /><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhhBVqxBva2z6Vt1Pb_7p1kcfKZheBHplw8KThwlQVl_kh2z776u8MNpbhaYk_6lN1w8WnzdzmfnnVdzEDMNamSqi7lIHg88pIg-jq3FzKBFa-KmYBw7cBm_74cUX-XjCEsvYus5hTdXqvlyo-xKiyL2VjvbQtXDkuR9CbZR63R2x5aol3IgA/s958/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2020.04.01.png" style="clear: right; float: right; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="958" data-original-width="738" height="320" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhhBVqxBva2z6Vt1Pb_7p1kcfKZheBHplw8KThwlQVl_kh2z776u8MNpbhaYk_6lN1w8WnzdzmfnnVdzEDMNamSqi7lIHg88pIg-jq3FzKBFa-KmYBw7cBm_74cUX-XjCEsvYus5hTdXqvlyo-xKiyL2VjvbQtXDkuR9CbZR63R2x5aol3IgA/s320/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2020.04.01.png" width="247" /></a></div><p></p><p>There are distinct styles she has tried out and used for a long or short time. And they don't all remain in her rotation. She prunes them. For instance, there was a particular style she used a lot in 2019, crouching in front of her long red couch, her hair in a soft wave. These are particularly mean. She favoured tight corsets or body suits and the topics include training and slavery, often with a bitchy or very mean element. She dropped the setting in 2020 and her look changed along with it. That's not to say that there are always such strong dividing lines in time. She always mixes up content and setting, outfit and look, but new styles appear in her roster, are prominent for a while and then disappear. Always different, always the same.</p><p>So these phases overlap and merge and continue. They're not sudden shifts, but from one year to the next there are styles and looks that are distinctive to that period.</p><p></p><p><span style="font-size: x-small;">[<span style="font-family: helvetica;">Edit: Reading back over what follows, I'm slightly uncomfortable at my commenting on her appearance, especially her weight. I'm just trying to describe how her look changes, I'm always in awe of how she looks and her weight doesn't matter. I think she looks just how she wants to look. I wouldn't dream of criticising. Also, I don't know for sure if Crystal has had surgery - apart from some work she had done on her nose in 2021, which she posted pics of. Again, it shouldn't need to be said. Her body, her life. Anyone can do anything to their own body. I'm trying to tread a fine line between describing her look, which I find fascinating, and commenting on it. Again, her body, her life.</span>]</span></p><p><span style="font-size: large;"><b>2015-2017 Soft, Thin and Hesitant.</b></span></p><p></p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: justify;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgN10FDmEG3Ok8vUBdeYQtNHcAbv42ogRMcXwk-n1DEZheSvflbv3et3b-umVN1rPtkbGtmw5E4WYp1MVKOhtc2a4z73qlOXZSdr2xecIW7kuumF5I0zfiBjWmjaAjFe2HSzl7aIX9cRoN1qQhW_tvkkEiL7QizjEZSy_Po_86zEseQoytrHg/s1064/Screenshot%202022-11-02%20at%2008.12.46.png" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em; text-align: center;"><img border="0" data-original-height="1064" data-original-width="720" height="320" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgN10FDmEG3Ok8vUBdeYQtNHcAbv42ogRMcXwk-n1DEZheSvflbv3et3b-umVN1rPtkbGtmw5E4WYp1MVKOhtc2a4z73qlOXZSdr2xecIW7kuumF5I0zfiBjWmjaAjFe2HSzl7aIX9cRoN1qQhW_tvkkEiL7QizjEZSy_Po_86zEseQoytrHg/s320/Screenshot%202022-11-02%20at%2008.12.46.png" width="217" /></a><span style="text-align: left;">I only have a couple of dozen of scenes from this period. She's clearly developing her style. It's great, but </span><span style="text-align: left;">she doesn't have the adamantine confidence of later videos. Also, she's moving around a lot more in front of the camera and she hasn't perfected her outfit or makeup choice. Some videos from this time have no femdom element at all - they're really softcore stripping videos.</span></div></div><div><p></p><p>She's very thin and very often dark., though there's the occasional blonde period. In fact, in her earlier videos her hair colour changes more frequently than later on.</p><p>These early videos aren't so well lit as later on, but the most noticeable difference is the sound. There's always a distinct background purr and a lot of echo. She will take some time to make this better.</p><p>Early on. Crystal wears a lot of bikinis and often she's standing up. To be honest, these are not my favorites but there are occasional flashes of the brilliance that she will later hone to a fine edge.</p><p></p><p>Some time near the end of 2017 I think she has some surgery done, or she just hits a new makeup style, I really can't say, but there's a point where she starts to look different and suddenly her confidence is much higher, and after this point, it's all femdom. </p><p><b><span style="font-size: large;">2018 Dark, Thick and Adventurous.</span></b></p><table cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="float: left;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgcvbbyJhrPuoO3u6PKYyY4o0QIb9v-gvMasRJ2OyCyaZBcR6DlrOAUtv5SIPQPbSdCN9KcZutsgfSMZX-Nb4cZWvL6yUiyYHlvkNU-UVIFYvCCI4V79Pa7fQdMOMKWzPNIIvNeTKLL7BSiICumw41MQ3JiWZeyL67wLDLsw4IAxG-TlN4JPA/s830/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2007.53.06.png" style="clear: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto; text-align: center;"><img border="0" data-original-height="830" data-original-width="646" height="320" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgcvbbyJhrPuoO3u6PKYyY4o0QIb9v-gvMasRJ2OyCyaZBcR6DlrOAUtv5SIPQPbSdCN9KcZutsgfSMZX-Nb4cZWvL6yUiyYHlvkNU-UVIFYvCCI4V79Pa7fQdMOMKWzPNIIvNeTKLL7BSiICumw41MQ3JiWZeyL67wLDLsw4IAxG-TlN4JPA/s320/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2007.53.06.png" width="249" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"><i>Who <u>wouldn't</u> want to be good for her?</i></td></tr></tbody></table><div>Until October 2018, Crystal's hair is dark and she begins a series of much stronger worded videos. She's not telling you to jerk for her, she's graciously allowing you to do so. Most of her videos are shot from a kneeling or crouching position, or she's standing, looking down at a much lower camera and she stays there. I think her body is a little heavier than most of the earlier years, though obviously she's still utterly perfect, and she begins to vary her themes and key styles more. <p>Here's a good standing example from this period. '<span style="font-family: arial; font-size: x-small;">Be a Good Cuckold For Me</span><span style="font-family: helvetica; font-size: x-small;">.</span>' Flawless outfit - it appears in many videos. The hairstyle is also one she favours in the period as well as the foot of her four-poster bed. Also, the gravity-defying thong bikini which she wears in a bunch of other clips.</p><p>More typical is this one, '<span style="font-family: arial; font-size: x-small;">Sports Bra Jerk Off Encouragement'</span>. Kneeling, no background and dark makeup. This has the perfect matter of fact line. "You need to jerk, harder. And you're going to." </p><p>That's a rare case where Crystal films in front of some sort of plain background. Most of the time she films in a recognisable room - a sitting room or a hall. You feel you're very intimately invited into her home. </p><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjBo2SbC47tBiTakDz8dJhJtYXwE33QepYY6X8YC7BpJdRxEK8l1DeZQWSqAw--Pm4lRmziXLBBEYoRKPEbEKU7kg5jC6ApNbQP8G7Aqvc4KbzyYO-wuu9TdKUwcgFRkQko76q_e1wd24HO5i9pitquk4LKWhGQDmt3ALqk_mHz9dOY9yXQIg/s1460/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2007.54.50.png" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto; text-align: center;"><img border="0" data-original-height="826" data-original-width="1460" height="362" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjBo2SbC47tBiTakDz8dJhJtYXwE33QepYY6X8YC7BpJdRxEK8l1DeZQWSqAw--Pm4lRmziXLBBEYoRKPEbEKU7kg5jC6ApNbQP8G7Aqvc4KbzyYO-wuu9TdKUwcgFRkQko76q_e1wd24HO5i9pitquk4LKWhGQDmt3ALqk_mHz9dOY9yXQIg/w640-h362/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2007.54.50.png" width="640" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"><i>You need to jerk. Harder.</i></td></tr></tbody></table><p>I think 2018 is the period I have most videos for, and definitely the most favorites, like the amazing '<span style="font-family: arial; font-size: x-small;">My words can make you do anything</span>.' For this post, I watched almost all of them again, and I think it was during this year that she moved from performing her scripts - amazingly well - to really believing them. In <span style="font-family: arial; font-size: x-small;">'My Words ..."</span> She says "You need this feeling. And you're going to crave it." The whole video is shot in close-up - she barely moves. Her eyes are locked on the viewer's. She speaks slowly, with authority and real tenderness. She's not merely performing, she's creating the role and inhabiting it. She is Crystal and she is literally irresistible.</p><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEi1eokV8BWWPilJ0san5vRku0tLZucHwgaDBNRDhbROsI3DLiIceWDK-MO3cSE8P0buzLvdjCRaxZBZyi5W4jy9FPbvkQqfQZRBLEiTL_n-32rkMljs7GcWQ95tADQguexmMoT1jcTQAYgNGzMAj3UP5jw7ONZrul90oVwp7ktCD0eWJ-mpkA/s1732/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2009.45.42.png" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="960" data-original-width="1732" height="354" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEi1eokV8BWWPilJ0san5vRku0tLZucHwgaDBNRDhbROsI3DLiIceWDK-MO3cSE8P0buzLvdjCRaxZBZyi5W4jy9FPbvkQqfQZRBLEiTL_n-32rkMljs7GcWQ95tADQguexmMoT1jcTQAYgNGzMAj3UP5jw7ONZrul90oVwp7ktCD0eWJ-mpkA/w640-h354/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2009.45.42.png" width="640" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"><i>My Words Can Make You Do Anything. </i></td></tr></tbody></table><br /><p><b style="font-size: x-large;">2019 : Honey Tresses of Pure Evil</b></p><p>Mid 2019, Crystal goes through around six months of a consistent hairstyle. At times the blonde highlights are more prominent, but in the main, she seems to have found a style she likes for quite a while. Also, some time in 2019, her face changes again. I think she has something done to her cheekbones, or again, maybe it's just a more consistent makeup style. All I know is she looks different again. </p><p>This is the red couch period, many of the clips from this time are filmed in front of a long red couch with the lips painting in the background. On the settee, she can sit, kneel or crouch in front of it, or even lie down. My own directory from this period is a deep red from all the red couch videos, one after another. </p><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEiGvnE-1RDkc5YH4dcUK6t4Ld_C7GG8WUTlfTuHTQNyrfEcHjJcIV27Pl0_9v1OQyZcftgkRcsHBAkngY35VCnBrX8H2YdoNtv4c0nMyd6EyefEYb7hqURbiGCoCGEMafq-6BCKi2vW3QEY_HAiKqBOb0hLZVf7Lw7XNK8CrgcAgus6K68m5A/s1909/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2011.16.27.png" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="1076" data-original-width="1909" height="360" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEiGvnE-1RDkc5YH4dcUK6t4Ld_C7GG8WUTlfTuHTQNyrfEcHjJcIV27Pl0_9v1OQyZcftgkRcsHBAkngY35VCnBrX8H2YdoNtv4c0nMyd6EyefEYb7hqURbiGCoCGEMafq-6BCKi2vW3QEY_HAiKqBOb0hLZVf7Lw7XNK8CrgcAgus6K68m5A/w640-h360/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2011.16.27.png" title="Peak Red Couch Period. How can you refuse this face?" width="640" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"><i>Peak 'Red Couch' Period. How can you say no to this face?</i></td></tr></tbody></table><p>It's a very prolific period, where she's posting multiple clips per week and many of them are custom videos. In style, she's now favouring much harsher content. But for Crystal, most often, that means a softer tone, an even gentler voice to deliver her excruciating lines. '<span style="font-family: arial; font-size: x-small;">In Your Head'</span> is a great example, or the devastating '<span style="font-family: arial; font-size: x-small;">Once a Loser, Always a Loser.'</span></p><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEizSXvMV5wc7-Bf83kHEzZhkIiDjHskwSAu3_t2GdCKSih5E_5gqbwnwFWdpxQIrX1aV_V5JOMIjPMIDjsT3cnO4OWcg0fYlNQlkLLLGgQ84ePi1o6TDeSpfXEOKoZtGWkyGvw-DcyiwuH_YAXR-jzNsq9UuM8MXwVDcN6uTqJDgJpNXY9R3Q/s1518/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2011.20.07.png" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="853" data-original-width="1518" height="360" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEizSXvMV5wc7-Bf83kHEzZhkIiDjHskwSAu3_t2GdCKSih5E_5gqbwnwFWdpxQIrX1aV_V5JOMIjPMIDjsT3cnO4OWcg0fYlNQlkLLLGgQ84ePi1o6TDeSpfXEOKoZtGWkyGvw-DcyiwuH_YAXR-jzNsq9UuM8MXwVDcN6uTqJDgJpNXY9R3Q/w640-h360/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2011.20.07.png" width="640" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"><i>In Your Head. And your Soul.</i></td></tr></tbody></table><p>A personal favourite here near the tail end of 2019 is<span style="font-family: arial; font-size: x-small;"> 'Extremely Hot Home Wrecking.' </span>Not a theme I usually go for, but her performance in this one is outstanding. When she says "Make Mommy Proud" she is just perfection. Confidence and authority just emanates from her. It feels like she will melt the camera with her raw power.</p><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEh_LxF5WC6OKQpYD8Ch_RffsvVmFAMHpmNBUE5p0Fk_8OVmY4Pp5C4taY12wncLimEEjprEWE8kyoW1wI0g-5tQCiVcmRBPfsrjmc4uHYyX2ZSEB5m1CQXWxsyPLBEgDulpXUbsNyyj3GFm6t2VBzAYPXlf75liYv5ADh-yPtH-cY9qCNe9Ew/s700/ezgif-3-b5fdeaf79e.gif" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="394" data-original-width="700" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEh_LxF5WC6OKQpYD8Ch_RffsvVmFAMHpmNBUE5p0Fk_8OVmY4Pp5C4taY12wncLimEEjprEWE8kyoW1wI0g-5tQCiVcmRBPfsrjmc4uHYyX2ZSEB5m1CQXWxsyPLBEgDulpXUbsNyyj3GFm6t2VBzAYPXlf75liYv5ADh-yPtH-cY9qCNe9Ew/s16000/ezgif-3-b5fdeaf79e.gif" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"><i>Do anything to make Mommy proud.</i></td></tr></tbody></table><p><span style="font-size: large;"><b>2020 The Dark Doorway to Slavery</b></span></p><p>I think Crystal moves into a new house near the end of 2019. Some settings seem to disappear around then, or get gradually faded out. Her favourite setting is before dark curtains in front of an archway. And she's changed appearance again, back to a much slimmer figure, either through surgery or dieting I don't know, but the look change coincides with a sudden expansion in topics covered. </p><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgnI5eJ2fqgK2PjKdjJi5EqPC0U8-aqB8tJ_H-MTjXsaXyurV16wE9ptCvi4Y18lbVDhCCLrAgPyConm9VL8uUQZ0jl-1AOw9pOyRGn3KZokiSKTCGyJNpUPWaiQjyrx7L9qWUImLBv25-XTNlsYX4qJHceTtHj3EjeOeSOrEpBem93CDB1vw/s1776/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2013.31.07.png" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="974" data-original-width="1776" height="350" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgnI5eJ2fqgK2PjKdjJi5EqPC0U8-aqB8tJ_H-MTjXsaXyurV16wE9ptCvi4Y18lbVDhCCLrAgPyConm9VL8uUQZ0jl-1AOw9pOyRGn3KZokiSKTCGyJNpUPWaiQjyrx7L9qWUImLBv25-XTNlsYX4qJHceTtHj3EjeOeSOrEpBem93CDB1vw/w640-h350/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2013.31.07.png" width="640" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"><i>Mesmerisation has never been so hypnotic.</i></td></tr></tbody></table><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: justify;"><br /></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: justify;"><span style="text-align: left;">It's around this time that she begins to do her mesmerisation, mind-fuck videos. They aren't as well developed in style as they will later become, but this is where they begin. Also, more videos are much closer to the camera. Leaning in and licking or kissing the lens in extreme close up becomes much more common and the distance between Crystal and her viewer shrinks to almost nothing. </span></div><br /><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjx48gl-C-0K8guF8VZwqhj5hPU2bqIJcG6MInh1oXLn1K7Vs4igYQJ2cNeWD9r8QG2oS_0vFwOOxJvCpU6NgUtXJ6simKu7SuyJDIUfIIMpf4nzi2waffsaS4tPlhBxVFP-ewQHRrHzjCUjBT6WJRZTWu_bkoioB4pMbGZeqdnaoUX6GzA_w/s1765/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2013.31.57.png" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="995" data-original-width="1765" height="360" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjx48gl-C-0K8guF8VZwqhj5hPU2bqIJcG6MInh1oXLn1K7Vs4igYQJ2cNeWD9r8QG2oS_0vFwOOxJvCpU6NgUtXJ6simKu7SuyJDIUfIIMpf4nzi2waffsaS4tPlhBxVFP-ewQHRrHzjCUjBT6WJRZTWu_bkoioB4pMbGZeqdnaoUX6GzA_w/w640-h360/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2013.31.57.png" width="640" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"><i>Fuck You.</i></td></tr></tbody></table><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: justify;"><span style="text-align: left;">Findom had been a common theme in all Crystal's videos to this point but during this time it becomes an element of almost every video and she begins to produce ever more explicit findom clips. Her <span style="font-family: arial; font-size: x-small;">'If you buy this'</span> series, which she'd started in 2019, really takes off in this time. She's now made 60 of these which are composed entirely of clips of Crystal flipping the bird and saying "fuck you" in a variety of outfits.</span></div><div><br /></div><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjOuxdLfH3kh7XqI208nZc3wly7rnqGxyt0spmnC5oCrXkChkq3_UzFZcklcDnhPuZxCCKcdEQKBJwN_7KsQVvDX65iKE1O2WcVTXlP4g0-q821bFXz_ftFjql0imQBj1uD4qdvnAcn4_oRXYoj4faTAtVlSTEmjtp6_rP0iRkQunSZsH5NAg/s1325/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2013.32.34.png" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><img border="0" data-original-height="754" data-original-width="1325" height="364" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjOuxdLfH3kh7XqI208nZc3wly7rnqGxyt0spmnC5oCrXkChkq3_UzFZcklcDnhPuZxCCKcdEQKBJwN_7KsQVvDX65iKE1O2WcVTXlP4g0-q821bFXz_ftFjql0imQBj1uD4qdvnAcn4_oRXYoj4faTAtVlSTEmjtp6_rP0iRkQunSZsH5NAg/w640-h364/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2013.32.34.png" width="640" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"><i>Worship is a euphoric release.</i> </td></tr></tbody></table><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><span style="text-align: left;"><br /></span></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: justify;"><span style="text-align: left;">But as well as all this, there's a very telling video from 2020 - '<span style="font-family: arial; font-size: x-small;">Training your positive femdom addiction.</span>' </span></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: justify;"><span style="text-align: left;"><br /></span></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: justify;"><span style="text-align: left;">But first, an aside. I think there's three kinds of scripts that Crystal works from. First, are the customs. Here, she has some phrases and bullet-points she's working in. Maybe a full script from a subscriber. You can tell these apart from the others, as Crystal's eyes will flick to the script every now and again. It's subtle, but when you're staring at her face, you notice. Also, there will be hints in her monologue, more laboured points, maybe a little hesitancy. And within the video there may be noticeable edit points where she's had to stop and restart. </span></div><div style="text-align: justify;"><br /></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: justify;"><span style="text-align: left;">Then, there's the more common clips where she's written something herself. She clearly has a theme, some phrases she's going to use, and maybe even some specifics, possibly an outline script. There's less hesitancy, it all flows better, and she's way more comfortable with her performance. </span></div><p>Then there's the ones where she has started filming with some idea, and she just extemporises around the theme. These are rare, but much more noticeable. No eye-flicks and no hesitation. She just lets it all fall out of her. I think, if I'm right, that these show a lot about how Crystal feels about her work. <span style="font-family: arial; font-size: x-small;">'Training your positive femdom'</span> is one of these. It's worthwhile quoting one passage at length.</p><p><i><span style="font-family: helvetica; font-size: x-small;">"You're so tired of hearing “Fuck you. Pay me.” as every girl's answer, to any question you send. There's such a difference when you're with me. It's such a euphoric feeling. So much pleasure. No degrading at all, because I know that I can get in your head. And I can own, control and dominate you without having to be a bitch. </span></i></p><p><i><span style="font-family: helvetica; font-size: x-small;">You need to learn something subby. So many of you do. Being nice does not make you submissive. Being kind and sensual does not make me submissive in the slightest. Do you see one thing on my body that’s submissive? Do you hear one thing I say that’s submissive? No, because I'm not. I just know the secret that nobody else tells you. You don't have to be a bitch to be dominant.</span></i></p><p><i><span style="font-family: helvetica; font-size: x-small;">In fact, being a bitch means you're trying to prove something. It means that you are trying to show the world how strong you are by saying stupid things. I don't have to do that. Now, don't get me wrong. Some of my boys love humiliation, and being degraded all day, every day. But the reason I'm so successful and the reason I do so well is because I'm not that way.</span></i></p><p><i><span style="font-family: helvetica; font-size: x-small;">I can appeal to that fetish. I can appeal to the desire for humiliation. But 99% of Crystal’s army, prefer me, the exact same way that you do. You just didn't realize how sensual I really am until you watch these Positive Femdom videos. Then you learned it's not about calling you a loser. It’s about telling you I want you to be a good boy for me."</span></i></p><p>She says all this without a single eye-flick or hesitation. She's just spelling it all out. I've said elsewhere that I think Crystal feels different to other performers. I think this is why. She loves dominating her boys, but she shifted from being just good to being outstanding, when she began to let her own feelings show in her videos. These positive femdom videos and her most luxurious mesmerising videos feel most true to her. She looks like she's enjoying recording them. She talks about 'Her Boys' so warmly that listening feels like the warmest, softest embrace. </p><p>Of course, maybe I'm imagining all this and Crystal is just a great performer. But I can't shake the idea that after nearly three thousand videos, she must feel something about her work and her fans. I think, in the above passage there's a hint that this is the real Crystal. </p><table align="center" cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;"><tbody><tr><td style="text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhUo_zoryJ5oR_HeXuPcW4sOg9RFF0Lp-gxBbjNvYpEFldbFwvEFD5OsnZBix3p3TYpcXBd8fpAGhO2Zqq7LBqRpb4kiXvyRJeaYGAm5AqmxFYd7hacWFYiQTQQZYaiKD0l6JlzmpD9yy-zUFNG6iafnPnRGQuQBiLcq-7UrjuRvWqYYLE2Tg/s1307/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2013.36.21.png" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto; text-align: center;"><img border="0" data-original-height="749" data-original-width="1307" height="366" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhUo_zoryJ5oR_HeXuPcW4sOg9RFF0Lp-gxBbjNvYpEFldbFwvEFD5OsnZBix3p3TYpcXBd8fpAGhO2Zqq7LBqRpb4kiXvyRJeaYGAm5AqmxFYd7hacWFYiQTQQZYaiKD0l6JlzmpD9yy-zUFNG6iafnPnRGQuQBiLcq-7UrjuRvWqYYLE2Tg/w640-h366/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2013.36.21.png" width="640" /></a></td></tr><tr><td class="tr-caption" style="text-align: center;"><i>Crystal just wants you to feel good.</i></td></tr></tbody></table><p><b><span style="font-size: large;">2021 Her Voice Consumes Your Soul</span></b></p><p></p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhqOkRDrmCacoY4YbB_eLjstx_C8sHxH6sId35cUhxRFMAPQVwoRZQ5PGGaudAXjzqtIMf2vGf4zGS_0VnPF6TtBh4c8wdm6jTcOF9NHHXWAjJ2Nw1JEH3r2uCt49qhPHrSAU0-BiiBiPNaWxmlOXmEkyB7-oXerIK0fb7bx2RPXF38vxgC9A/s1019/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2021.49.48.png" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="1019" data-original-width="798" height="320" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhqOkRDrmCacoY4YbB_eLjstx_C8sHxH6sId35cUhxRFMAPQVwoRZQ5PGGaudAXjzqtIMf2vGf4zGS_0VnPF6TtBh4c8wdm6jTcOF9NHHXWAjJ2Nw1JEH3r2uCt49qhPHrSAU0-BiiBiPNaWxmlOXmEkyB7-oXerIK0fb7bx2RPXF38vxgC9A/s320/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2021.49.48.png" width="251" /></a></div>I think, some time in 2021 Crystal gets a better recording and editing setup. Her voice is clearer and softer and the audio level is more consistent. The dark doorway is still there, and the red couch features every now and again but she's rarely standing up.</div><div><br /></div><div>This is the period when her tone becomes even more alluring and insidious. Breathy, slow and intimate, she leans into the camera, exuding power and confidence. "Tell me you love me." She suggests in '<span style="font-family: arial; font-size: x-small;">Fall into Trance</span>' and you find that it's become impossible to resist her, even if you wanted to.</div><div><br /></div><div>It's all so slow and unhurried. The viewer finds themselves drawn into the warm, enclosing space she has created for her subjects. Her suggestions, her commands, are so compelling and arousing that you truly find yourself willing to do anything she asks. Jerk for her for hours? Beg for her strap-on? Leave your wife? Leave your job? Pay her all your money? Eat your own cum? You would be crazy not to. It truly begins to feel like a privilege to obey her.</div><div><br /></div><div>Her real gift, I think, is that she grants the viewer - her boy - the permission to jerk off to her. She truly encourages you to sink deeper into adoring bliss for her. There's a trust, a compact. You both agree that she is magnificent, her viewer, worthless. And thus in agreement, everything is possible. You can both revel in her utter beauty and her boy's desperate longing.</div><div><p></p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEigs7NPV3BcaNEPRomeUQAARiesZjt9sNvxWiTDngkPqLbiLEkUGFdevVflkDADSLwJIKaXKxF2-YCjyNl2Dm8vs7Oooe4T3Wdo49DGETGbHSuzaiNEK9HH8rtmkp4nVl5CsM3pjp8CPEDVLvNE2FsM8f1-BGh10lP7CAClzlxSVq-Y_Jj94Q/s1016/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2021.50.26.png" style="clear: right; float: right; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="1016" data-original-width="636" height="320" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEigs7NPV3BcaNEPRomeUQAARiesZjt9sNvxWiTDngkPqLbiLEkUGFdevVflkDADSLwJIKaXKxF2-YCjyNl2Dm8vs7Oooe4T3Wdo49DGETGbHSuzaiNEK9HH8rtmkp4nVl5CsM3pjp8CPEDVLvNE2FsM8f1-BGh10lP7CAClzlxSVq-Y_Jj94Q/s320/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2021.50.26.png" width="200" /></a></div>It's all so languid and unhurried. Crystal has learned to use her voice, her manner and her movements to create an atmosphere and a mood that is utterly compelling. It's subtle and effortless. She's still labelling some videos 'mesmerisation' but really, it's all mesmerising. Even something as mean as 'Jerk with your tears' is delivered in a soft tone. Brutal. Cutting. But so gently delivered. When she says "Nobody wants you. Nobody wants to fuck you. You're never the bully. You're the one that gets bullied." the whiplash between the words and her whispered delivery is torture. <p></p><p>But it was after I saw her <span style="font-family: arial; font-size: x-small;">'Being normal is boring'</span> clip that I realised just how special Crystal is. She's like a cuckoo chick planted in your mind. She's so powerful, so greedy, that you can't help but fall in love with her even as she murders everything else that you care about, just to make more room for her, her, everything for her. "Being normal sucks." She says. "Why would you want to be normal, when you could be my sub?"</p><p>Being her sub feels like such a wonderful privilege. Really, it's everyone who has yet to discover her who is deserving of pity.</p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhbvd4Vc5pytbbgX4OgtwIgfLUUz0pCmyL1oJii3QVKtKhNKEVf3u8yjn2sORgXLerxyqq-NOQsNlNdK1QUyhIS-R234QVBRE0Mb0ByG_npjE8T4cUV5aJB64ze-8uGaBtUZMRu5AmwAcNP0zgo-jQ1s7Gr36XpLL99LrMxt7kJp-CARQgUrA/s1506/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2021.51.53.png" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="1023" data-original-width="1506" height="434" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhbvd4Vc5pytbbgX4OgtwIgfLUUz0pCmyL1oJii3QVKtKhNKEVf3u8yjn2sORgXLerxyqq-NOQsNlNdK1QUyhIS-R234QVBRE0Mb0ByG_npjE8T4cUV5aJB64ze-8uGaBtUZMRu5AmwAcNP0zgo-jQ1s7Gr36XpLL99LrMxt7kJp-CARQgUrA/w640-h434/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2021.51.53.png" width="640" /></a></div><p></p><p>This theme, that a life jerking to Crystal is patently better than any vanilla relationship, is a constant presence. In 'Stay Single For Me' she really lays it out. "I want you to get five clips which you can spend the rest of your night with. Five clips that you can date all night long." This relationship is perfect.</p><p><b><span style="font-size: large;">2022 She Towers Over Your Prostrate Form.</span></b></p><p>Since I make PMVs, how the performer fits in the lens is very important to me. Crystal's clips fall into two broad categories here, standing and non-standing. Non-standing might include crouching, kneeling, lying or anything where Crystal is not on her feet, and very often she will shift position from one position to another, especially if she's performing with a couch or a seat. </p><p><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgyXIy2vyLPm5l5ROPhzYx5PtRBOGZ3QgFCO0kVpFWhTpF13ebMWdW1lj7fwC8zGP_Hr4E6bXdDpo-69EYk79mEAVhtUUCxI20oaq-p-OX7vSk1PNy-RZrDE7tXoNGx5wMhR6HfI_1gNHc8D3ojBjLfT4ZlytVvrfSQgAy5LJBgmRTp6rk6mA/s1813/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2022.13.52.png" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em; text-align: center;"><img border="0" data-original-height="1075" data-original-width="1813" height="380" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgyXIy2vyLPm5l5ROPhzYx5PtRBOGZ3QgFCO0kVpFWhTpF13ebMWdW1lj7fwC8zGP_Hr4E6bXdDpo-69EYk79mEAVhtUUCxI20oaq-p-OX7vSk1PNy-RZrDE7tXoNGx5wMhR6HfI_1gNHc8D3ojBjLfT4ZlytVvrfSQgAy5LJBgmRTp6rk6mA/w640-h380/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2022.13.52.png" width="640" /></a></p><p>Standing though, is standing, often with a camera lower than waist-level and while she may move forward and back, she doesn't move from standing to any other position. She's always done these standing scenes, but in 2022 she noticeably increased the number of standing clips. At the same time, her variety and range of outfits seems to have shot up, and I think these developments are related, since when she buys a new outfit, standing position may well show it off best. </p><p><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEiUpEwFCOnAINyuux-Rd2EC3lPLw4OiEJqAeIB1ID3piemRDyzENOERkXudVQr03jEzWV_HtM0MDyu16GzGd8OGxZnDmoFnZuOqrb5FGemqx6k5fdpvpGdXYxtCYeBLhj2vlV_bu9FeYnnWk0tcuBg6pzO8Klt7Px4DlxsqyAppbzz7ua5acg/s1719/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2022.13.05.png" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em; text-align: center;"><img border="0" data-original-height="1071" data-original-width="1719" height="398" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEiUpEwFCOnAINyuux-Rd2EC3lPLw4OiEJqAeIB1ID3piemRDyzENOERkXudVQr03jEzWV_HtM0MDyu16GzGd8OGxZnDmoFnZuOqrb5FGemqx6k5fdpvpGdXYxtCYeBLhj2vlV_bu9FeYnnWk0tcuBg6pzO8Klt7Px4DlxsqyAppbzz7ua5acg/w640-h398/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2022.13.05.png" width="640" /></a></p><p>And the new year seemed to show a great many new outfits. New lingerie, new bikinis. Dresses! Velvet bodysuits and leather bustiers! Romper suits and sheer baby-dolls. Crystal has never been shy about investing in clothes but the variety and range seemed to have moved up a couple of notches.</p><p><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhmnaUqtoUklNidi4YnsvNPvSTo5Webm_G6iJ8vv6PlmFplVEwdrg3e_rUpZV8Y9c4JkNGZuffSDnGaHs__tkLZ2PdkIrOYd9B_jc60O_1Gnt6m17ikevhkVyTOg7Ca_5VgElXVmgERhzAoAPbzSyOTM0sqwY5Sobwh3uNRaAw0TQUw8IipVw/s1579/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2022.15.19.png" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em; text-align: center;"><img border="0" data-original-height="1144" data-original-width="1579" height="464" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhmnaUqtoUklNidi4YnsvNPvSTo5Webm_G6iJ8vv6PlmFplVEwdrg3e_rUpZV8Y9c4JkNGZuffSDnGaHs__tkLZ2PdkIrOYd9B_jc60O_1Gnt6m17ikevhkVyTOg7Ca_5VgElXVmgERhzAoAPbzSyOTM0sqwY5Sobwh3uNRaAw0TQUw8IipVw/w640-h464/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2022.15.19.png" width="640" /></a></p><p>Right now, it's harder to see the edges of her latest development, but it is so good to follow her career as she hones her abilities and her range even further. </p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEiu_kNSpF8F8hKDfEVhXzsaijRgxyxIo0u-L6CFTMY-QJl3oyNGu3k_WRW2kTq-U3ramFWL_ieju3Grx-56UzFyJzDlmFExdM5G1J2AENM4i43BHIwRHldMvi0mgEQCpn_7FoANPLK03r5Azp_dHiAIC8Y0__qsepjJtBvSlF2CkwkTcn4czw/s1785/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2022.12.12.png" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="1153" data-original-width="1785" height="414" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEiu_kNSpF8F8hKDfEVhXzsaijRgxyxIo0u-L6CFTMY-QJl3oyNGu3k_WRW2kTq-U3ramFWL_ieju3Grx-56UzFyJzDlmFExdM5G1J2AENM4i43BHIwRHldMvi0mgEQCpn_7FoANPLK03r5Azp_dHiAIC8Y0__qsepjJtBvSlF2CkwkTcn4czw/w640-h414/Screenshot%202022-11-01%20at%2022.12.12.png" width="640" /></a></div><div><br /></div>I follow other femdom stars who produce similar content. I'm often surprised that they get more attention and more views than Crystal's content on IWantClips or OnlyFans. I can't help but think that this is intentional. She doesn't seem to attend shows, do interviews, or put herself out there just to gain attention. Her army is a secret army. She concentrates her time on filming and producing. I've commented before that the preparation for each clip must take a lot of effort. Hair, outfit and makeup alone probably takes half a day and that's without the setup and editing and producing it onto her different platforms. </div><div><br /></div><div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;"><br /></div><b><span style="font-size: large;">Conclusion.</span></b></div><div>I know almost nothing about Crystal Knight, the person, and trying to get inside the head of a performer only through their performance is an exercise in folly. Doubly so, when their entire performance is based around getting inside <i>your</i> head. </div><div><br /></div><div>What I do know of her, is all good. She is hardworking, conscientious and honest. The few fellow-fans I've talked to unanimously report how professional, kind and understanding she is. </div><div>On the few occasions I've interacted with her, I've experienced the same. She is warm and considerate. She takes infinite care over what she's delivering and does so with a smile. In short, she makes you feel like a good boy.</div><div><br /></div><div>The way she has developed her style and her content over seven years leads me to conclude that she must enjoy doing what she does. To have produced so much and so well, makes me believe that she feels affection and respect for her boys, her Crystal army. How could she be this good at it if she didn't feel something for her fans. She understands them, perfectly. She wants to make them feel good. She wants them to be good boys for her. </div></div></div>Alamo Preacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05382309157117039998noreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7500944.post-55795243154057070072022-09-30T13:53:00.001-07:002022-09-30T13:53:00.169-07:00Are you cucking him hard enough?<p> </p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEirYhSTezuXt5-ofWC1LtFUZPEOPVyEIcUPzs-KNBf0gLc9030oTrdVtuYA0qEKg1GxvOR19YIKNvYT6M2IhqU9HSyIKpdxBw2TGaBURrSoyTmBPsPHw3Ig-CR0Laxrzd03o6mXM33m-iODBFkK3jQaKJ8luqhiTGKy8rlxqw9PNGLwolS76w/s4600/AreYouCuckingHard.png" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="3534" data-original-width="4600" height="492" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEirYhSTezuXt5-ofWC1LtFUZPEOPVyEIcUPzs-KNBf0gLc9030oTrdVtuYA0qEKg1GxvOR19YIKNvYT6M2IhqU9HSyIKpdxBw2TGaBURrSoyTmBPsPHw3Ig-CR0Laxrzd03o6mXM33m-iODBFkK3jQaKJ8luqhiTGKy8rlxqw9PNGLwolS76w/w640-h492/AreYouCuckingHard.png" width="640" /></a></div><br /><p></p>Alamo Preacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05382309157117039998noreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7500944.post-20891513530033170782022-09-29T13:48:00.001-07:002022-09-29T13:48:00.183-07:00Are You Being Catfished?<p> </p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjVmwZ1iAU_W5ZovOKcoQVebFQRSA3APHOdlES39ZRP6Z0e78QcTMvcL2qLv0-RBL4grdT_il7opyhG_h3Hr5vQluLxly7NE_l8bOHEwga2iJgqKJqzooTGd6Ihi0u09p6RGv4ahaXHsP8nCyVoU6_0Y5xWVZQ3oQZ0C8vHN48sEKaV6DAsLg/s3672/AreYouBeingCatfished.png" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="3303" data-original-width="3672" height="576" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjVmwZ1iAU_W5ZovOKcoQVebFQRSA3APHOdlES39ZRP6Z0e78QcTMvcL2qLv0-RBL4grdT_il7opyhG_h3Hr5vQluLxly7NE_l8bOHEwga2iJgqKJqzooTGd6Ihi0u09p6RGv4ahaXHsP8nCyVoU6_0Y5xWVZQ3oQZ0C8vHN48sEKaV6DAsLg/w640-h576/AreYouBeingCatfished.png" width="640" /></a></div><br /><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><br /></div><br /><p></p>Alamo Preacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05382309157117039998noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7500944.post-33848600746156891732022-09-28T10:29:00.004-07:002022-09-28T10:29:00.197-07:00Have You Fallen For the Right Boy?<p> </p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhY2aK34JIhdVJyOgQkF2ZQOck8fr5wSrpadODJaK2LLo-Ah5i5FkkFLeBPr_at9md1HAV_ELPJsfRRE7LMOIwZYHmOFTdQKGfe2RuXcQY1gx8Fe6xdS2YWnO5PhX6M27cTVsU3MCeOzLW9-2JL3y-DJS8MfcgTlDqxW9txIhryvJUDqWzKDw/s1890/HaveYouFallen.png" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="1550" data-original-width="1890" height="524" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhY2aK34JIhdVJyOgQkF2ZQOck8fr5wSrpadODJaK2LLo-Ah5i5FkkFLeBPr_at9md1HAV_ELPJsfRRE7LMOIwZYHmOFTdQKGfe2RuXcQY1gx8Fe6xdS2YWnO5PhX6M27cTVsU3MCeOzLW9-2JL3y-DJS8MfcgTlDqxW9txIhryvJUDqWzKDw/w640-h524/HaveYouFallen.png" width="640" /></a></div><br /><p></p>Alamo Preacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05382309157117039998noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7500944.post-11057068598807964212022-09-27T10:26:00.005-07:002022-09-27T13:40:53.192-07:00Are you in the Friend Zone?<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjaeC2ZcmSpO3RAH1lLO7uK0JTAIZcMXkEJy-lBfDyrvT2auoab-v6g4WbJuYw6LQUS08thti9Qj3Rtsjvp27u0WUlK45MzlscKW22AqvqXL_GgEACK--hWO4iTrWTZMpyCGakUqlH_S2-EgwdTdHJuru3EYCALJ1JxswWJocUCYEYuKnVgsw/s3775/YourPerfectGirlfriend.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="3775" data-original-width="1240" height="2076" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjaeC2ZcmSpO3RAH1lLO7uK0JTAIZcMXkEJy-lBfDyrvT2auoab-v6g4WbJuYw6LQUS08thti9Qj3Rtsjvp27u0WUlK45MzlscKW22AqvqXL_GgEACK--hWO4iTrWTZMpyCGakUqlH_S2-EgwdTdHJuru3EYCALJ1JxswWJocUCYEYuKnVgsw/w681-h2076/YourPerfectGirlfriend.jpg" width="681" /></a></div><br /><p><br /> </p>Alamo Preacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05382309157117039998noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7500944.post-4335493161601177252022-04-14T00:56:00.007-07:002023-08-24T01:00:52.612-07:00Cuck Storm Replacment. A continuation of Reluctant Cuckold and Cuck Storm Horizon by David McManus.<p></p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgkPODMjtQQI_PvcarXZ85Jmvp70Wg9sNN36i4oLC32AXqLEztSqX1FmPGk-macR1o6gIGFRAbqmVR-nXX_wn-sihGW0QzEYtBY11vT37iswZ71iL8Nu1D2vjEhHRgg-n6FW8IcG-9-9BklI0EA_2aRNTZhb_YqtJ4Ydq6VX_bWyomaplMSMw/s500/RC.jpeg" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="500" data-original-width="313" height="320" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgkPODMjtQQI_PvcarXZ85Jmvp70Wg9sNN36i4oLC32AXqLEztSqX1FmPGk-macR1o6gIGFRAbqmVR-nXX_wn-sihGW0QzEYtBY11vT37iswZ71iL8Nu1D2vjEhHRgg-n6FW8IcG-9-9BklI0EA_2aRNTZhb_YqtJ4Ydq6VX_bWyomaplMSMw/s320/RC.jpeg" width="200" /></a></div> I used to read a lot of cuck fiction, but since I stared writing my own and making PMVs, not so much. However, there was one story I kind of half-remembered and went back to recently. "<a href="https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B006M4A7Z6/ref=dbs_a_def_rwt_hsch_vapi_tkin_p1_i0"><i>The Reluctant Cuckold</i></a>" by David McManus. It's on amazon - <a href="https://www.amazon.com/Reluctant-Cuckold-David-McManus-ebook/dp/B006M4A7Z6" rel="nofollow" target="_blank">here</a>. It was just as good as I remembered it. What makes it stand out is that it really, really takes it's time in the build-up and it spends a lot of time inside the cuckold protagonists head. Which makes it sound boring and slow, but it's not because inside is head is a maelstrom of doubts and self-delusion and denial. he imagines conversations that might happen or could happen as he endlessly tortures himself with an incident where his wife cheated on him. <p></p><p><br />He becomes so obsessed with this that he ends up pursuing a path of letting her cuckold him again, even while deluding himself that he's trying to sop obsessing about it. It's so well done that even small incidents get blown up into powerful emotional surges and the reader is drawn inexorably into his world.</p><p></p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhoF1636xv0zfA_2Q6YlD5PEzWXqlykik4KjkIQ7CceLxsFzy4gyDPkLyo88_G8siUmZorvEGiHaTLS33Si342QBleT5PxHKCJv1mc_b1EzjeL8XSOFjEipOLBsWN41qvZCvHMCgyESpedBuJL4p6Hw-SVKYJLyjCxpWT_30aIEukI8Sa6Evg/s500/CSH.jpeg" style="clear: right; float: right; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="500" data-original-width="313" height="320" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhoF1636xv0zfA_2Q6YlD5PEzWXqlykik4KjkIQ7CceLxsFzy4gyDPkLyo88_G8siUmZorvEGiHaTLS33Si342QBleT5PxHKCJv1mc_b1EzjeL8XSOFjEipOLBsWN41qvZCvHMCgyESpedBuJL4p6Hw-SVKYJLyjCxpWT_30aIEukI8Sa6Evg/s320/CSH.jpeg" width="200" /></a></div><br />So, it turns out there's a sequel - <a href="https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B00NN7MGTU/ref=dbs_a_def_rwt_hsch_vapi_tkin_p1_i1"><i>Cuck Storm Horizon</i></a> - that seamlessly follows from the first book. It's just as good - the only criticism is that he spends too much time away from his wife in the first half and there's fewer opportunities for him to be triggered. But after he gets home, it really heats up.<p></p><p>The first book is from 2011 second book came out on Amazon kindle in 2014. A three year gap and as far as I know, he never wrote anything else. At the end of 2016, he did an interview, <a href="https://fannypress.com/2016/12/15/meet-david-mcmanus-author-of-the-reluctant-cuckold-series/" target="_blank">here</a> where he said the publication of a third book - <i>Cuckold Uncharted </i>- was imminent but it has never appeared.</p><p>The first cuck story I ever wrote was a continuation - really a rewrite - of an existing story I liked. Since then I've written a lot more cuck fiction. So I've had a go at doing a third part myself. I can't write like him, and that wouldn't be much fun either, but I liked the characters and the setup so much I wanted to give it a go.</p><p>After a first draft, I'm disappointed with it. As is always my failing, I just can't help driving the action on way too quickly. I make Ashely go out and buy cameras so Dave can watch her fuck, and before there's even a chance to use them, Mike is fucking her at the kitchen table. David McManus would be horrified at my helter-skelter pace. Worse, I couldn't keep up the introspection after page two and it's all just exposition. </p><p>So, I'm having another go. Unpicking it all back the the next morning and trying again. This time, I'm going to try to recreate the impact of some of the best parts in the original. The ones that stuck in my mind - the ones that made me go back were the moments when the protagonist realises his wife is about to go to bed with her stud. It's her manner in those moments that are so good. "We're going to go to bed now honey, okay?" It's all been leading up to this, but in an understated, ambiguous way and then it hits him. And she's looking for assent, but she knows it's coming. There's a slightly sad, but terribly exciting feel to these moments and they can't happen without a lot of build-up.</p><p>Update : So I went back to it and rewrote a lot of it. I added a lot more introspection and used that to low it all down more. But, I'm stuck again. The cameras are a problem for me. I want dialog and the cameras are one-way sound. I think the scenes where he listens at the door in the original don't work so well either. So I have to get around that somehow. Plus, I'm drawn to the impact of the first time David is in the room is more of Mike going. "I'm going to fuck her right here." That's sudden and jarring, and I like that, but it goes against the pace of the story. It's all fixable. I'll do another chapter. </p><p>Update June 2022</p><p>I wrote a lot more. As much and a half again, and I re-wrote some of the earlier parts. I'm still not happy but I found when I eliminated Ashley being more explicit with David, it began to lose any sense of reality. She really has to push him more after the birthday night. </p><p>I did it as an ebook (I work in InDesign). The ebook is <a href="https://drive.google.com/file/d/19wZf0aicxY4kX9onL-06lmSVmvvUwOyw/view?usp=sharing" target="_blank">here</a>. It has some NSFW pictures as chapter breaks. </p><p>I also generated a PDF, no images. <a href="https://drive.google.com/file/d/1-SvsEDFUJZYWuL37aCaRMwkRkWCvNpMO/view?usp=sharing" target="_blank">Here</a>.</p><p>Comments welcome and appreciated, here or or on GoodReads</p><p><br /></p><p><br /></p>Alamo Preacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05382309157117039998noreply@blogger.com21tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7500944.post-55966455322422478922022-04-11T01:44:00.002-07:002022-04-11T01:44:11.250-07:00Xxylana Marie PMV<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEj7Jb-gl-5BBQBTNPZ8833so5SVyEkEQD7D4R1WnaQaQjsZjF6RngClv6yDC1fURM3C_1a6T21UF49dgpTLvU0IaqQGclejNO7TZNJ1Qm7fPR_VyNXgk0XGosFKcSdIQDCoXvWAq_NC2RsWetzCSyBKAvqdIuR5gryDeZ768NgxEBOoD-JGOQ/s1200/ezgif-4-bd2c0761b2.gif" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="169" data-original-width="1200" height="90" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEj7Jb-gl-5BBQBTNPZ8833so5SVyEkEQD7D4R1WnaQaQjsZjF6RngClv6yDC1fURM3C_1a6T21UF49dgpTLvU0IaqQGclejNO7TZNJ1Qm7fPR_VyNXgk0XGosFKcSdIQDCoXvWAq_NC2RsWetzCSyBKAvqdIuR5gryDeZ768NgxEBOoD-JGOQ/w640-h90/ezgif-4-bd2c0761b2.gif" width="640" /></a></div><br /><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><b><span style="font-size: large;">Perky, Pretty Xxlayna Pounded Perfectly.</span></b></div><p>Crystal Method did a song called "Name of the Game" which was used in a number of video games back in the day. The one I remember was 'Splinter Cell' which perhaps reveals my age. Anyhoo, it's a great track with a very solid beat, just perfect for a PMV.</p><p></p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhDinJ_MI9QOUMZ9qR_2MLbV-vAVoNoDMVLN25P2Cr3BPczqTSCT_zOuEqa53RNkE9qBgPsaR7ku0IGRODwWCdaxR_mlK0RV1reCjt4P03XDoljb1lqZR5KQzMblTJ9ffzSLpUe1bStmfLQYVo3H-_dh7A_4EC0tFxJKCsg4eiq5JgxFsPxIA/s480/ezgif-4-608cae1539.gif" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="270" data-original-width="480" height="180" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhDinJ_MI9QOUMZ9qR_2MLbV-vAVoNoDMVLN25P2Cr3BPczqTSCT_zOuEqa53RNkE9qBgPsaR7ku0IGRODwWCdaxR_mlK0RV1reCjt4P03XDoljb1lqZR5KQzMblTJ9ffzSLpUe1bStmfLQYVo3H-_dh7A_4EC0tFxJKCsg4eiq5JgxFsPxIA/s320/ezgif-4-608cae1539.gif" width="320" /></a></div><div style="text-align: justify;">A while ago, my idea for this track was to pick good clips of a number of girls, and concentrate on them one at a time. Abella Danger, Xxlayna Marie, Aaliyah Hadid and others. But as I did the Aaliyah Hadid sections, I got so enamoured with her, that I spun it out to a different PMV altogether. When I went back to it, I finished the Abella Danger bit, but then, Xxlayna entranced me too and then I found even more amazing videos she's done, so this is spin-off 2. I may never finish the original. </div><p></p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: justify;"><span style="text-align: left;">This video uses a lot of the HussiePass vid Xxlayna did with Jax Slayer. In fact, I had to try hard not to over-use that scene because it' so good. But the BBG one she did with them is also excellent and the other two BG ones aren't bad either. The great thing is that all four have extended BTS videos. I don't know why, but I always liked BTS scenes where the cameras, lights, etc. are in view. There's something extra pornographic about seeing the scene filmed with the crew moving about. So I mix those scenes in quite a bit with the actual filmed scenes. </span></div></div><p style="text-align: justify;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgIm88ffnmbc7QzDghCRSKmQUCEJvy3Thgv8XK9Ik0f3gxkR7dvqI7T3LaRQuwT6bD9r6SSkIpnSlCwxWfcFECdkLKHVHs0tvwfp104SVwy0qTloj05T9i0DrtB6KrbGtR8uW-giI3EtLKxEPlYUvl7Y-w-2x6AVs7KbrdSEa4fCo0Hys-3Fw/s480/ezgif-4-bd38ddcde4.gif" imageanchor="1" style="clear: right; float: right; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 1em; text-align: center;"><img border="0" data-original-height="270" data-original-width="480" height="180" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgIm88ffnmbc7QzDghCRSKmQUCEJvy3Thgv8XK9Ik0f3gxkR7dvqI7T3LaRQuwT6bD9r6SSkIpnSlCwxWfcFECdkLKHVHs0tvwfp104SVwy0qTloj05T9i0DrtB6KrbGtR8uW-giI3EtLKxEPlYUvl7Y-w-2x6AVs7KbrdSEa4fCo0Hys-3Fw/s320/ezgif-4-bd38ddcde4.gif" width="320" /></a>Xxlayna has done some other great ones though. A Bang : Pretty and Raw BBG is really good as well as all the Dadcrush ones she did. She seems to really go for those stepdad/stepbrother ones, or maybe she particularly got offered those. </p><p style="text-align: justify;">In many of those, Xxlayna is getting banged pretty hard, often doggy style, and those scenes are great for beat-matching so there's a lot of just extended sections where she's getting pounded to those beats. I re-used the original tracks break section a couple of times just to get as much of that in as possible. To be honest, I could have kept the whole thing going for twice as long, but quality over quantity won out. </p><p style="text-align: justify;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgDHpTisF2ctklVk39w_7WmQgtlbzj8pgxoBUP5yUCM_PONt0pjPMeVMNk5QHpw75c01MgU3LqLzmAC3U8BER-93KdhSoeTuFJgIg9UPTt5Ib2K9dkvw7Ziz9YQXwSwtzr89TAnwJbvNobeQs8Ubk_g9CfVh5sJBHA-8FcZkdB-FpW-gXvFjg/s480/ezgif-4-9540f7c306.gif" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em; text-align: center;"><img border="0" data-original-height="270" data-original-width="480" height="180" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgDHpTisF2ctklVk39w_7WmQgtlbzj8pgxoBUP5yUCM_PONt0pjPMeVMNk5QHpw75c01MgU3LqLzmAC3U8BER-93KdhSoeTuFJgIg9UPTt5Ib2K9dkvw7Ziz9YQXwSwtzr89TAnwJbvNobeQs8Ubk_g9CfVh5sJBHA-8FcZkdB-FpW-gXvFjg/s320/ezgif-4-9540f7c306.gif" width="320" /></a>And there's so much quality. There's her two Netgirl scenes, a bangbros and two nympho scenes. With all this hot porn, Xxlayna is really spoiling us. She vocalises a lot too. I spent a bit of time trying to get the best audio. YMMV - sometimes people say the voice drowns out the music, other people say they can't hear words because of the track. For me, I want groaning and moaning in the background and words to be clear. Somtimes it's hard to make out on the orginal. If you can't tell what she's saying, it's probably something about the size of 'Daddy's' cock.</p><p>Thnakfully, many of these scenes concentrate on her face. She is incredibly pretty and has these, huge, dark eyes. When they hit the camera it's like being mind-melded with her. She really is amazing. </p><p><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgPKjOYS-DXnmldK7dmTG500j9Ieo1dtL8DlfJfeDCVuw0BNiy9ccWXaYi8egK0og5SSiayMnpI48V8a6R_nPfkvILl3FWWmM3bgHcc8BkAB82zNeitvWlrK0Mc6A5rv9POhvzhgLnZHvsTdrZnuR5OJb1QFxz0FhinDSugVpZVVRfkU_otXg/s480/ezgif-4-6e29beed1a.gif" imageanchor="1" style="clear: right; float: right; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 1em; text-align: center;"><img border="0" data-original-height="270" data-original-width="480" height="180" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgPKjOYS-DXnmldK7dmTG500j9Ieo1dtL8DlfJfeDCVuw0BNiy9ccWXaYi8egK0og5SSiayMnpI48V8a6R_nPfkvILl3FWWmM3bgHcc8BkAB82zNeitvWlrK0Mc6A5rv9POhvzhgLnZHvsTdrZnuR5OJb1QFxz0FhinDSugVpZVVRfkU_otXg/s320/ezgif-4-6e29beed1a.gif" width="320" /></a>I screwed around with masks and pointillist generated effects in this one. I wish I'd stuck to a single style, but I was experimenting, so there's a bewildering variety of crazy stuff happening in the faster scenes. I timed the original track to a neat 10 frames per beat at 29.97 which meant only speeding it up by a few percent, so it's faster than the original, but not chipmunk fast. I used a lot of masks in this one to pul out the background and either add a background effect or a distance blur so Xxlayna seems to pop out of the screen. I really need to start convertng these to the target frame rate. When AE generates the MOV file I use in Premiere, if the frame rate doesnt match, I can't pull in the background and make it match each frame. Mostly it doesn't matter, but in places it leads to ghosting. But there's so much going on in those clips it probably looks intentional.</p><p><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEi2ybOaqZvfSKNn9R6yviqZP5Lr5owrRrNJYiyCdZM80lwQ_o00U8Hz4zEwBjSGoctlrzyBq9AAb7fgubCrSXJFURliLuDIQngMpT4VcJschv_z5t-H6-fNiUTcSTgViAhLn1sWuv7Em-AVMbCIIjGOioUB9j2T2GxzdepwIqWveJQ21LEYSA/s480/Xxlayna%20Marie%20WIP%20PMV_2.gif" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em; text-align: center;"><img border="0" data-original-height="270" data-original-width="480" height="180" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEi2ybOaqZvfSKNn9R6yviqZP5Lr5owrRrNJYiyCdZM80lwQ_o00U8Hz4zEwBjSGoctlrzyBq9AAb7fgubCrSXJFURliLuDIQngMpT4VcJschv_z5t-H6-fNiUTcSTgViAhLn1sWuv7Em-AVMbCIIjGOioUB9j2T2GxzdepwIqWveJQ21LEYSA/s320/Xxlayna%20Marie%20WIP%20PMV_2.gif" width="320" /></a>Splicing the BTS and the filmed scenes together was very satisfying. You get a dual-camera effect, but that wasn't available for some of the key scenes. Presumably the footage wasn't usable from the BTS camera. </p><p>Interestingly (to me, anyway) the Jax Slayher Hussiepass BTS shows a long, long section between the end of the filmed fucking and the cumshot. In it, Jax is on his back (lazy bastard) with Xxlayna pulled tight to him, fucking her from below. The main camera isn't running - just the BTS camera, and it goes on, like that, her on top, him hugging her hard, for about ten minutes. The crew speak in low tones, and you can just hear one of them say something like 'You want me to get the fake cum?". They don't need it in the end, he's able to get off and give her a facial, but it's like he can't finish without doing this. Slightly weird and also, kinda hot. I didn't use that. But it was intriguing.</p><p><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgEfqv3BjD0DlerYl75HPMPJ8VLMIsgJ9ZSfCoCZtOu7WQd95rw4JlAUyrszsO_kimbpz2QutMLnspMHde0JUymkPTq0eLUTkOLoh-0NNg1Qg-ObGzM4_SLshsn0tqcMddVQfGeBFy3QoOyF1XJKyd7nyprZ61T_1fJL9M5NRsR-CX_r1bgMg/s480/ezgif-4-09ce43c24b.gif" imageanchor="1" style="clear: right; float: right; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 1em; text-align: center;"><img border="0" data-original-height="270" data-original-width="480" height="180" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgEfqv3BjD0DlerYl75HPMPJ8VLMIsgJ9ZSfCoCZtOu7WQd95rw4JlAUyrszsO_kimbpz2QutMLnspMHde0JUymkPTq0eLUTkOLoh-0NNg1Qg-ObGzM4_SLshsn0tqcMddVQfGeBFy3QoOyF1XJKyd7nyprZ61T_1fJL9M5NRsR-CX_r1bgMg/s320/ezgif-4-09ce43c24b.gif" width="320" /></a>Xxlana has an OnlyFans - I joined it when I started to make this. She posts A LOT, every morning. She's really chatty and she makes a fair amount of semi-professionally filmed content as well as the usual selfies and short clips. As a veteran of many pornstar OnlyFans, she is the most prolific poster of non-PPV content I've seen. And she posts quite a bit of PPV content too.</p><p>So, strong recommend. She's perky, beautiful and fun, and if you've enjoyed this PMV she deserves your support.</p><p>Want to see this PMV? </p><p>Join <a href="https://onlyfans.com/xxlaynamarie" target="_blank">Xxlayna's Only Fans</a>, then add a comment on this post below. </p>Alamo Preacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05382309157117039998noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7500944.post-13978419164050903412022-02-17T04:23:00.004-08:002022-02-17T04:24:29.225-08:00Yes, But Does She Love You?<p> </p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><br /></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><br /></div><div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/a/AVvXsEhbqlaBPZ0I-GWS1ziq0t3m8DKHy0INiePBHcgCXZCEuuzcoiJf8OtVlL8JYf6rc8jD0ruppZaDZA89NzWHxGAvTDLZvMY3OC1Y2r_ymVBN6I-obMxTqP06HI7TO9r-OiX-uB5vHAindGwZcbe0vpOtEiLWhjNOLtl1ePLicJVC0vIH6v1i9w=s7550" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" data-original-height="7550" data-original-width="2480" height="2231" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/a/AVvXsEhbqlaBPZ0I-GWS1ziq0t3m8DKHy0INiePBHcgCXZCEuuzcoiJf8OtVlL8JYf6rc8jD0ruppZaDZA89NzWHxGAvTDLZvMY3OC1Y2r_ymVBN6I-obMxTqP06HI7TO9r-OiX-uB5vHAindGwZcbe0vpOtEiLWhjNOLtl1ePLicJVC0vIH6v1i9w=w732-h2231" width="732" /></a></div><br /><p></p><div><a href="https://drive.google.com/file/d/1u6PWuFC24G94yZsStmVpm1o6y6BZ5fqO/view?usp=sharing">PDF Version.</a></div>Alamo Preacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05382309157117039998noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7500944.post-63871045658896875762022-02-15T05:22:00.002-08:002022-02-16T01:44:59.701-08:00How was your Valentine's Day?<p> </p><div class="separator" style="clear: both; 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