So, I've been working on this below for a while. At first, I was just doing something for a magazine - a short fantasy article, but it got longer. Anyway, was hoping for some feedback. I've done about four times more than these two first pages. I'll post them over the coming week.
I have always found your stories to be very human, by which I mean understanding and tolerant of human frailty. This has great potential. Please continue, and let all the emotions play out. When people are committed to one another, they will seek to understand and support each other, and finding out the depth of trust in a relationship is very powerful emotionally.
I have always found your stories to be very human, by which I mean understanding and tolerant of human frailty. This has great potential. Please continue, and let all the emotions play out. When people are committed to one another, they will seek to understand and support each other, and finding out the depth of trust in a relationship is very powerful emotionally.
回复删除Oh dear. I have feeling you'll like the next few posts, but the end may not be to your taste....
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