Decisions within replacement.

As I posted a while ago, I've got back into Replacement and I think I'll finish it this year. 

This is actually a rewrite of the previous (unfinished) version I did a few years ago.

I abandoned that because I was unhappy with it for a few fundamental reasons.

1. It moved way to fast with Ashley becoming a full on femdom Domme in the first chapter.

2. I had way too little of Dave's introspection and self-defeating internal monologue.

3. There wasn't any point to it - just Dave getting cucked in more and more extremesituations until the story stopped.

However, as I wrote the replacement Replacement, I felt I was falling into the same traps again. 

Here's some of the questions I grappled with. (Some spoilers for this, but TBH by the time I finish, you'll have forgotten)

1. Watching is key. Mike is pressuring Dave to watch all through 'Horizon'. Should Dave watch during this book? Or, save it for a denouement? Or never happen. 

In more than one chapter I get close to this, so much so that I stop writing, becuase (a) if he watches, is there anything left to the story or have I 'shot is bolt' so to speak? (b) If I keep upping the ante, in ever more explicit situations, it becomes unbelievable that he doesn't end up watching. 

Related to that - does Ashely want him to watch? She doesn't really seem to want this during Replacement or Horizon. But in this I strongly hint that she does. 

Why? Because Mike wants this.  She's ambivalent. She doesn't think she'd feel comfortable with Dave watching. 

But, she doesn't like aspects of Dave's reaction to her cucking him. She doesn't feel guilty exactly, but she worries that he's becoming isolated and depressed and that he will grow away from her. Mike claims (to her in private, off-screen) that if Dave can accept and embrace the situation (by watching) then all will be well. She believes him at first, but over the course of the story she begins to doubt Mike's honesty.

I like this working out of the dynamic. I think it goes some way to solving the lack of a plot too. Ashley slowly beginning to mistrust Mike is a core theme running through it. 

But - if during the story Ashley wants Dave to watch (for his own good - she'll get over her discomfort in order to help him) wouldn't that just happen? Dave is drawn to be being cucked like a moth to a flame. If both Mike and Ash want him to watch and lot of the story is them fucking, then won't it happen?

I think I've solved this, although with some straining credulity. Dave will get close to watching a couple of times but it never quite happens. Until the end.

2. Ashley fucked Jim Murta and dishonestly hid it from Dave. The admission scene in Reluctant is brutal. If, (and I can't ever let this go) Ashley really loves him, this is problematic. Mike is totally different. Dave set them up like a cuckold cupid and let them at it. The bathroom scene was secret and hidden. She lied about it. Ashley only 'confesses' because Dave is about to find out anyway.

Dave never really goes there in Reluctant or Horizon. He gives his little 'All I want is to know the truth' speech in the bar and he pretty much sticks to that line ever after. Even when Mike takes her through the blow-by-blow recreation Dave isn't ever thinking of her as 'cheating'.

So if she loves him and is essentially a good person, how does she justify his to herself? Even if her justification is not spelled out, writing some kind of happily-ever-after denouement has a giant Jim Murta elephant in the room. 

Here's a digression. Many people who've written reviews or have emailed me about this story take it as read that Ashley is a selfish hypocrite. I don't subscribe to this. Not because of anything in the OG stories - that's a perfectly reasonable conclusion to draw from what McManus wrote. He never really makes a judgement on Ashley. 

But I just don't pray that way. For me every female lead character in a cuckold story is a blameless angel who loves her cuck husband. That's just the way I'm wired. See my post on the Syril and Dedra relationship here. 

So, to get around this, I'm going to have to give Ashley some reason and context, and some blame. 

So, we get a conversation with Tamara where she brings Dave back to remember some incidents before their marriage. Ashley flirting with other guys. Dave being weird and cucky about it. Ashley insisting on them being apart in the weeks before their wedding. His resting-cuck demeanour. The whole thing about him as Carrie puts it. And in another conversation Carrie makes him realise that what's happening to him is just as much about him as it is Ashley. 

So when they're in the bathroom, yes Ashley is horny and thrilled at the transgressive idea of fucking her coworker while Dave is outside. But, at the back of her mind is the idea that Dave might like it. She's not 100% certain but she has a gut instinct. 

Afterwards, she's just not brave enough to tell him. She's not really certain. She worries that even if she's right about Dave, it might still blow up their marriage. Why not confess? Why not be at least a little bit remorseful?

 Because she doesn't regret it. She loved it. She wants to do it again. Not with Jim, she recognises that was a big mistake, but with anyone else. At that time she is conflicted.  But then Tamara tells her that Jim has blabbed and there are rumours. Tamara advises her to come clean, that Dave will like it, and if not, then fuck him. But Ashley panics and tries to cover it up. She regrets that decision, obviously. But almost immediately Dave changes. Even while he doesn't know the rumour is true, she can see a change in him and the idea that he is a cuck gets firmer and firmer. Well before he introduces Mike she knows he's a cuck and she looks for situations where she can get fucked again. 

3. Does Ashley want Dave to watch? There's zero hints of this in the OG novels. In fact, everyhting takes place behind closed doors. She doesn't seem to mind him listening, but that's kind-of driven by Mike.

In my head-canon, yes, she does, but not as an end in itself. She actually thinks she might be uncomfortable with it. She'd do it, but it's not a goal for her. BUT she does worry about Dave. She knows for sure he enjoys this, but she can see his tortured internal conflict. She thinks maybe that's just how it should be, but it's a background niggle for her. More importantly, she worries that the cucking is making them grow apart.

They have reacted to the original cucking in different ways. Dave becomes more submissive to Ashley. She seems powerful and beautiful and wonderful to him. He's even more in love with her than ever but he's also ashamed and confused about his feelings. Sharing those feelings with Ashley is terrifying and shameful to him. So he becomes furtive and secretive - hides at his parents house. Jerking off in bathrooms etc. He won't 'open up' as Ashley wants.  

Ashley feels exhilarated and powerful. She's becoming the sexual person she always was but was too repressed by convention to express. She's on a cloud of euphoric sexiness all the time. Cucking Dave, his submissive behaviour make her love him all the more. She wants to share how she feels with the man she loves and to understand and share in his feelings. But he's hiding from her. He won't 'open up'. 

And she's getting bad, self-serving advice from Mike. He tells her that if she can get Dave to watch, he'll be able to accept everything and he'll open up. So, she does work towards that - but she wants him to watch as a means to an end.

Mike? In my head-canon, he is, to some degree, a bad actor. I won't go into it to much now, but for Mike, fucking Ashley is a side-benefit. His main motivation is bullying and dominating other men. He really wants Dave to watch him fuck Ashley because he gets off on the shame and humiliation he's causing. He's kind of a twisted bully. He lacks the ability form normal relationships with other men. He likes Dave, a lot. But he expresses that by wanting to utterly dominate him sexually through his wife. 

So, it's complicated, and getting all that onto the page is difficult, especially as my tendency is to write endless sexual dialogues between the main characters which tell rather than showing. 

 

Dedra and her guy - an Andor alernative.

 

Did anyone else ship the Dedra-Syril relationship in Andor as hard as I did?

Watching it, I felt like a secret queer in the sixties or seventies watching a gay relationship that had been smuggled into mainstream TV.

"Oh wow, he likes this. OMG, she knows exactly what she's doing. He loves her. She loves him. This is FemDom. It really is."

Now, the relationship wasn't exactly smuggled into the show. Dedra is shown to be sympathetic and we get to see Syril's motivations. He's a good guy, just on the wrong side. 

There's a trope of course. "Bury Your Gays" And it felt exactly like that when Syril blames Dedra for betraying the Ghormans and heads off to his inevitable death. Their love is pure but corrupted, so he has to die for his transgressive love and Dedra gets her just deserts in an imperial prison.

Nobody seemed to have a problem with this, calling it 'Syril's redemption arc' and just deserts for the Imperial Gestapo leader. But seriously, fuck that. 

In the balance between his Mistress and the fate of a whole planet Syril's clear choice should have been to back Dedra to the hilt, no matter what. What are the lives of millions of spider farmers compared to his devotion to his one true love? Maybe he could have tried to persuade her but finally agreed to follow her lead. Could they have just abandoned their jobs and fled from Ghorman to live out their lives together on the Galactic rim? Anything would have been better than Syril dying pointlessly. 

Given that we don't really get romantic payoffs for any of the main characters, wouldn't it have been great to have the transgressive femdom couple lose the war but win each other. I'd have given anything to see Dedra and Syril get away and live out their relationship. Sigh.

Back to Replacement

I took the plunge back into Cuck Storm Replacement. I've connected some chapters, removed some parts that weren't working and marked some as 'done'

Here's one which I don't think I've posted before. It's fairly early, in the first third of the book. 

Ashley and Mike have agreed on a tennis date. Dave has been working his way up the corporate ladder.

PDF version here.

Strict Wife Magazine.

 Back in 2011, fourteen years ago, I started writing a fake magazine called 'Strict Wife'. It started with the cover - suggestive article headlines - hinting at a magazine filled with content for Women in Female Led Relationships. You've probably seen similar kinds of things online. But I went ahead and actually wrote some articles for it and pasted in images I found.

I've been going back to it, on and off ever since. In 2019 I reformatted it and wrote a bunch of new stuff. In fact, one or two full stories began as articles in the spoof magazine and then I developed them into complete stories later.

Also, I sometimes write one-page questionnaires or short things that tongue-in-cheek might be the kind of thing you'd find in a magazine, but in a cuckold/femdom context.  I did these for this blog. "So he called you Mommy during Sex." or "Is he the right boy for you?" or "How to introduce your boyfriend into your marriage." I added those to the magazine as I did them too.

Avery Cristy is not a featured editor.

Now, with all the accumulated content  it's over 100 pages, with a lot of illustrations and images - all cribbed from the internet. 

Over time, the form and tone solidified. The magazine is supposedly written by a group of contributing editors - all women. The audience is women in FLR marriages, or who are at least FLR-curious. They conduct surveys, interview leading psychologists, publish letters, and do special series on aspects of female-led-marriages. 

There's an explicit tone and a meta-tone. On the surface, this is all serious, scholarly work for the FLR community. Their core philosophy is that men are to be loved and cherished, but many of them are weak-willed, submissive creatures who are much happier in loving, but submissive relationships with their wives. They are not to be casually abused, but physical correction can have it's place. Cuckolding is a natural, but not essential progression for a wife-led marriage. 

The meta-tone is tongue-in-cheek, rather than ironic. The parallels between a typical womens' interest magazine article and those in Strict Wife is meant to be funny. The tone of condescending affection for husbands, while advising on how to break their spirit or control their lives is also humorously intended.

This tone hides the both subtle and explicit fact that the whole magazine is about love. Even in the most outre femdom articles about cuckolding or pegging or, God-help-us, castration, the voices of the authors or readers always come back to the love they have for their husbands and their husbands for them. This stuff only works in a loving context. If you don't love your wife, then you might get angry if she sleeps with someone else, but for gut-wrenching emotional and erotic reaction, you need to love her. Similarly, many of the articles are about the emotional effort required to properly train and condition a husband. All throughout these, there's the stated caveat, that if you don't love him, then what's the point?

Loving wives care about their husband's reputation.

And the articles feed into other writing or are spin-offs from stories I'm working on. One example is the "Your Boys" article - still unfinished. In it, I wrote short excerpts from women in cuckolding FLR relationships where they discussed the confusing relationships between their husbands and their sexual partners. One of those is clearly the Ashley, Dave and Mike relationship from Dave McManus's The Reluctant Cuckold series.

So if you're interested in Reluctant Cuckold, and my attempts at a third part, here's that article (unfinished) as images - sharing the pdf is beyond blogger.

 

 

I may publish the whole thing one day but (a) many articles are unfinished (b) Some of the layout is awful, and needs a lot of work, and (c) tons of stolen images, so maybe not.

Have you been Caught?

 

Anna Claire Clouds PMV

Anna Claire Clouds PMV

 As I may have written a few times already, sometimes when I start a PMV I get very enthusiastic about and idea and then run out of steam. But sometimes, I get really into it and plough through very quickly. The difference, always, is the pornstar. And it's never how they look, but how they act in scenes.

Anna introduces herself.

Anna Claire Clouds is one of those stars that just seems to leap out of the screen. Glances, sounds, smiles, movement. She does everything so well and she's done a bunch of great scenes. She's on a career high right now, and the main thing that slowed me down on this one was that new scenes kept coming out that I felt I had to include.

Amazing scene from Amateur Allure

For this, I used two Chemical Brothers tracks, ElektroBank and Hey Boy, Hey Girl. I don't transition between them very well, partly because ElektroBank has a stupid MC part at the end and then starts really suddenly. There's no way to blend it in easily. This also makes this quite long. To be honest I had trouble finding where to cut it off. 

Only ACC is in this. She's done many many threesome and girl-girl scenes and as usual I skipped all of those so I can concentrate on her and her amazing face. I find including scenes with another actor just doesn't feel right.

Anna really puts it all into her performance

So, what's so great about her? First off - she has incredible energy. She's incapable of just lying there. She's bucking, she's writhing, she's pushing back, she's grabbing at her partner. She's also so into the scene that at times her partners seem to be just clinging on for dear life.

Anna looks amazing

Secondly, like all my favorites she gives those amazing glances under her eyelashes to the camera. I never like scenes with no eye contact and Anna just can't help catching the camera over and over. Picking out those clips was a pleasure. There's an eyelid flick around every corner and each one is more expressive than the last.

Kissing dominates the whole break section.

But what really makes her stand out is kissing. Anna kisses her partner in almost every scene she does. And not just some fake, over-directed things. She grabs them, throws an arm around them and works her face onto theirs. She loves kissing and nothing makes a scene better. I include a couple of long sections where she's just throwing herself at her partners, sometimes to their obvious shock and surprise.

There's no fancy effects or editing tricks in this. It's practically all just zoom and pan, pan and zoom. I colour-corrected some clips where the edits jarred, but apart form that it's all just Anna as the original file was published, with each clip cut to the beat of each track.

New Cartoon

 A while ago, I did this.

I've been working on another video - not a sequel, but the same style, ever since.

The basic story here is - our hero has cuckold fantasies - he jerks off to internet dommes and cuckold porn, but he doesn't ever imagine his actual wife in these scenarios - he just likes the porn. 

Then his wife, played by Eva Lovia gets a job offer to work on a TV show in L.A. - a big opportunity for her, but it will mean a month away from home. Thinking this will be a great opportunity to really indulge his cuck porn addiction, he encourages her, and even calls in a favour from an old college buddy who is now a bigshot TV producer to help secure her the job. 

There's a tearful goodbye as she jets off. But before he gets a chance to revel in the privacy and his cuck porn collection, his wife calls to say her sister needs a place to stay for a while , so shes going to move into their spare room for an open-ended period.

His sister in law, played by Emma Lux, is totally different to his innocent wife. She sees straight through him to see the beta cuck loser he really is. Within days she's ferreted out his porn collection, his online accounts and his particular shameful fetish. 

Emma explains the awful truth.

She blackmails and manipulates him, and within a couple of weeks he's been manoeuvred intoto agreeing to his wife cucking him in LA with the friend he called in the favour for. Emma makes this look like it's all his idea. There's a series of escalating video calls with his wife as she casting-couches her way to success, where he has to pretend he's cool with all this. Meanwhile the sister in law humiliates, teases and bullies him at home. 

There's quite a bit of ambiguity and double-meaning in the conversations between Peter and Eva, where he thinks she's asking his agreement for her to interview for bigger roles, but it could also mean she's asking if he's okay with her hooking up with his friend.

In the scenes with Emma, she never explicitly blackmails him, although she's sure to leave that impression as she takes compromising photos and videos of him.

I'm happy with the casting choices. I have a ton of clips of Eva on the phone, doing cam stuff, interviews etc. And her higher-class videos for Digital Playground and Vixen have loads of story elements.  Emma is just so deliciously mean and has done so much content it's relatively easy to find clips that work.

As before though, the whole process of cutting, copying, prequelling and porting the files is a pain. Also, the timing and pacing is so awkward in Premiere - getting text and visuals to line up in interesting ways is painful and making edits to them is exasperating as you work with the video, frames, text boxes etc. etc.

The process pf writing it, is even more organic than with a standard PMV. I have a rough outline of where the scene is going, pick clips for that, lay them out, switch the positions, closeups etc. so it has some visual interest. But making text match the visual to match the text is a back-and-forth balancing act, so when I have a good scene I'll try to write dialog to match it, but other times I can't write what I want because there's no clip that can make it work visually. 

Emma reassures her cuck

The main problem though is that I tend to write dialog-heavy, over-written screeds of text. Cutting it down to the most-impactful essentials is really difficult. Comics are not supposed to be walls of text with a few pictures. I have to constantly fight the urge to blurb ever longer paragraphs into text boxes. This is a battle I am consistently losing.

My appreciation for comic writers and artists grows all the time. Even if I had complete freedom to create any image in a panel I don't think I could do much better than my clumsy efforts. Brevity, and show-don't-tell are the hardest things to master. 

I estmate this is around two thirds towards a complete first draft. But I have to go back and fix timings in a lot of places, and where I've done simple text boxes and a frame of video or two, I need to rework sections so it's more visually arresting. Plus, groan, a lot of the text needs to be edited down to make it concise. The groan there is that reducing text means reducing video length with all the knock-on effects. 

I'm constantly amazed at the visual impact that this cartoon filter has. I'm working with images of two of the most beautiful women, ever, but when I lay out the cartoonified images they have an impact that seems even greater than the originals. Does this mean I'm intimidated by real women and really see them as unreal fantasy figures? Yes, probably. In fact, that should have been obvious some time ago.

Cuck therapy.

As usual the idea of publishing this gives me the heebie jeebies. Not that it's disturbing - as usual the whole story is suffused with love and affection. There's always a happy-ever-after for me. But even more than with a PMV, I've taken clips of performers work and mashed them into something else. I've put words in their mouths and presented the whole as my own work. I doubt Eva Lovia would care one jot at this time, but Emma Lux is a working performer making amazing content. I doubt she'd give permission for this to be published and worse, she might be really annoyed and upset about it. Making either of them unhappy is a horrible idea. 

I plan to send Emma a message telling her about it. While it's not her words, and the video is changed, who know, she might like it, and I'll put promotional messages for her IWC and onlyfans all over it. Eva is a different matter, she has her podcast now, and I can't imagine there's a bunch of cuck-hounds who want to subscribe to it. Though of course, there's just her coffee tip-jar thing, so maybe I could promote that.

This is just window-dressing to assuage my guilt at stealing their content and repurposing it of course. 

Working on the project is fun, but frustrating. I don't get to write at the pace I'd like. The visuals make it more restrictive and editing is a pain. But, working on the double path where the text feeds off the available scenes and the visuals inspire the text is very satisfying. 

I think this one will finish up being around twelve minutes long. I'm sometimes inclined to write it as an actual story but I'd feel guilty about writing anything while Ashley Mike and Dave linger on my hard drive, accusing me when I waste hours on other stuff.

Cuck Storm Replacement Comments.

 Didn't expect so many comments. It's great. Thank you all.

I feel guilty that I've only shared excerpts. I'm planning to share the first four chapers (the first one is much the same, breakfast-in-bed one from the first version) and an outline of all the rest. I've written a bunch of those, but they don't all connect up yet. 

In the meantime, because Blogger's comments are so crap - 

It’s hard to say what’s too much when you only have fragments to go by. Like you said in your earlier post, the slow burn of his cuckolding needed the mundane chapters to help build up the impact of the erotic ones. Everytime he thinks things are going back to normal, he gets hammered by his cucking. If you have enough downtime between the erotic events, I think it should be fine.

 I have two storylines that serve for downtime - his increasing success and dynamism at work and Ashley's increasing dissatisfaction with her own. As I see it, his attempts to distract himself from his reaction to Ashley cucking him make him work harder. Plus, they way this whole scenario has knocked him out of his complacency make him more of a risk-taker, which leads to good outcomes for work. But he never connects this to him becoming more attractive to Ashley, even though it is. 

It takes a while to reveal, but the rumours about Ashley in her workplace are affecting her. Her colleagues disrespect her, eventually leading to her leaving that workplace and changing her career.

I really liked the characterization of Ashley. You made it clear that she pities Dave which indicates that she does care for him. Seeing your husband reduced in status like that can’t be easy. But also, you can see her cunning. She knows that if she controls his orgasms, she controls the relationship. In this way, the nofap plot line is very logical. It makes me think that Ashley’s mother is going to play a much bigger role in our perception of the character. She and Ashley’s father got divorced at a young age, and this is an attempt to prevent that fate from ever happening to her.

I don't know if she pities him. She's intrigued by his reaction. She absolutely does love him, and she loves the way this lifestyle makes her feel, but she's concerned that if he continues to masturbate alone then their relationship will suffer. Plus, although he loves feeling slutty and Dave knowing about it, she shies away from him seeing her as she's just old-school embarrassed about someone watching her fuck. Especially as she's so submissive with Mike and she feels Dave might lose respect for her if he actually witnesses this in person. This is exacerbated by the way Mike talks about it - he's most interested in the cuck dynamic where he is essentially dominating Dave, by dominating her, and she doesn't really buy into that in the same way.

The audio at the end was a neat idea. It does seem pretty elaborate for a new cuckoldress to do. But like I said, without reading the work as a whole, it’s hard to tell if it’s too much too soon and it is an idea that I don’t see often. I’m wondering if he’s going to not go for it, but then he gets caught snooping on her laptop or something later. It would be a temptation that he can’t resist.

She wants them to do this together. Before this she's tried different ways for her and Dave to have sex in a cuckold context, short of him watching live. She wants him to jerk off over her in a way she controls. This is her latest attempt. There's video to follow in this scene. The point (for her) is for Dave to talk to her about how he feels.

From Another Anonymous user, or the same one, who can tell?

I liked this excerpt more than the one with Mike - think I have a vague disagreement about importance of Mike. Would rather see her go back to Jim, do something with Jay, and continue with Ryan and Chang stuff. Mike is great and he can be focus but I am less interested in them *dating*. That being said, I love it all, lol.

Given your photo choice, I'd love to see Ashley also open up with a sleeve tattoo or getting her tits pierced with Tamara. 100 percent agree with wanting to know more about submissive shirt. 

Oof. I'm pretty invested in Mike. I don't think we'll actually 'see' her with anyone else. That said, there's a world of imagination out there. Jim Murta is problematic for Ashley. However, Jay does feature in a fantasy session early on. (That fantasy scene in his parents house is one of the best in the originals I think).

Ryan and Chang never really did it for me, but there's that whole party with the submissive TeeShirt and Tamara to revisit. I'm writing that at the moment.

From Bermugandr

I don't think the pace is too fast. I think the previous version was maybe a bit too fast but I really liked the content in general. I wanted to see what happened next and the interactions with the friend and anther guy. To me I think an increase in pace was needed at this point. It's like the beginning of a coaster where you go slow as your pulled up to the top. I felt like at the end of the second book we where at the top of the coaster. Like at some point his internal tension has to break one way or another, no change in pace isn't realistic either. Often the first step is the hardest and things snowball from there with each step after coming faster. Either he starts accepting bit by bit that he wants to be cuckolded and a Sissy or he has to reject to all together.

I'm of the view that the originals work so well because while he thinks he wants to reject this, every action he takes is a subconscious attempt to embrace it. He sabotages himself at every turn. When he accepts it,  even bit by bit, the story is over. If he rejects it, then it turns into something different where Ashley is doing this to him over his protests.  I'm trying to keep that mental dichotomy up in Dave's head, but each ratchet makes it more and more unbelievable. 

I really liked the revaluation that she had been doing her own research and wasn't just going along with what mike told her to do. It removes a lot of his fears. I think your set up in this section could maybe be near to the front and a good jumping off point into something from your previous long story which is her own research, that outside of the games in there normal life he's still her man and husband and only his whining makes her lose any real respect for him.

Yeah. Ashley is smart. She sees through Mike's self-serving bullshit easier than Dave. She likes spending time with him and she loves fucking him, but essentially he's a friend who she could never be with as a partner. From the start, she's realised there's something slightly twisted in Mike. He's more interested in his Dominant relationship with Dave than with her. He likes fucking her, but that's mostly because it's a way to reinforce his dominance of Dave. He has no interest in being with a single woman. So of course, she's done her own research and she realises not everything is as it seems. 

She knows Dave's whining is not the full story - it's obvious he's really getting off on the whole scene. What she wants is for him is to be able to have a 'cuckold orgasm' with her. 

If you want her to continue as a loving wife, it's also key for her to tell him and him to slowly understand it's there love that makes this so good for her and makes it work at all. Like maybe on an arousal scale sex with him alone is like a 2, sex with mike alone is like a 5, she wouldn't be able to let go so much without him in the picture, but watching him masturbate to her and mikes video is like an 8 and having sex with Mike knowing that love of her life is at home unable to get pleasure and that he's thinking about how the love of his life is out with another man is like a 100. Not exactly like that and he may not full believe it at first. 

Mostly agree, except I'd reverse those last two - her ideal scene is Dave (submissively) jerking off over her after she's been completely satisfied. Imagining Dave denied and desperate while she gets fucked by Mike is cool, but she really wants to hear how she makes him feel and how, for him, she's this incredibly unattainable forbidding sexual being who's also a totally wanton slut. 

Same user? Different?  Who Knows? But, wow. You've put so much thought into this. Thank you. I'm sure it's not desreved.

So story board idea using a lot of what you already have.
1. This is before any camera's get installed and is the first video he sees.
2. She doesn't say anything just teases him with the video and her body and it doesn't take long till he's close.
4. She then pauses and it's just as she starts to give Mike a blowjob. Tells him she's never seen him this hard before nor leaking so much precum and he see's her start to masturbate. He see's an opportunity to convince her that she's what turn him on and not what she's doing. She says that's not true, that it's not just her but what she's doing to him. She then tells him Mike's not the first big cock she's sucked, he mumbles about Jim. She ignores this and say nor was Jim. But never until now was she turned on by giving a guy a blow job. It was the fact that she was giving Mike a blowjob while he, her husband and the man she loves, was at home locked up and unable to get any pleasure. That in this part he was the only thing turning her on and now he get's to see he give mike one of the best blowjobs ever because of how turned on her husband made her. He whines about this which causes her to stop masturbating and rebuke him that only his whining is causing her to lose respect for him.
5, She stops any come back by starting the video and his eye's are drawn to the screen. He tell himself he'll show her by not saying anything or masturbating. However, as if it has a mind of it's own his body takes over and he starts to masturbate and in no time he's close again.
6. Pause again. She tells him he must love being her cuck because he can't look away and masturbates so hard. After all he could just look at her and not the screen if it was really just about her. He decides to try and just not say anything but vows to himself he'll just keep looking at her.

7. However, just as it resumes he her's a slap and his eyes are immediately drawn to the screen. Distantly he hears her giggle but can't tear himself away as he's seeing his wife worship with her mouth another, larger cock while moaning after each slap. After a little bit of this he's close again and she pauses.

8. It's an effort but after a bit he's able to tear his eyes from the screen and back to her. She giggles again seeing his struggle and then starts to masturbate again. He asks her if he'd spank her would she go back to being his again. This time it's less whining and more begging or pleading which turns her on more. She explains that he couldn't as he's not that type of man. He starts to try and say something but she cut's him off. Saying she could never love or be with the type of man who could spank her or dominate her like Mike does. She know from experience loving or being with that type of man comes with more negatives than it's worth and what she's found with him is deeper than just sex after all big dicked dominate guys are a dime a dozen but a man who likes being cucked and is strong enough to let her cuck him is one in a million. She masturbating while saying this turned on by what she's doing to him but he can also see the deep love in her for him in her eyes.

9. Seeing her love for him echoed in his eyes she tells him that he can cum on her foot but he has to thank her for cucking him while he does.

10. At this point he's lost every argument pushing him further into a submission to her and his fears temporarily put to rest his true desire comes out. He thanks her profusely for cucking him while having the biggest orgasm of his life. She also has a big orgasm as she see's him cum.

11. before the come down can start she grabs his attention an tells him if he wants to see more of the video he has to lick his cum off her foot. Which he does and after finishing as he's hitting the low he see's her counting down.

12. Then you can have the after care scene you did previously. Give him the chance to stop it if he wants, he doesn't.

13.I think for timeline purposes a time skip would work well. Like they keep watching the video while masturbating and she shares what she was thinking/feeling and turned her on. Maybe the next scene is them at the end of the video with some progressions. He's not hesitating about thanking her for cucking him she's masturbating but now maybe wearing loose clothing so he just see her hands moving under her clothes. I don't think you need to show every little step and you included him masturbating with her clothed previously and I thought that was as good place for this to end up.

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  You get to the difficulty with all this in point 13. It's too much in one scene, hitting every cuck thing in one session. If we're time-skipping in and out, like a movie might do, then you can string it out but the tension gets broken with every skip. To be honest, I think you suffer from the exactly the same eat-all-the-sweeties-in-the-bag-all-at-once problem that I do.

A the end of this scene he's thanking her for cucking him and after that, there's really nowhere to go.

Back the the point by point - I don't think she can only enjoy giving blowjobs knowing that Dave is denied - I think she does like sex, it's just better for her if it's kind of slutty. 

On the whining - in what I've written this time around, she never directly rebukes him for whining - it's always Mike. In fact, for her, while nobody likes listening to whining, she knows this is a symptom of the fact that her cucking him is eating him up. If he stopped whining it might meant he was becoming indifferent or inured to it, which wouldn't be a good thing for her. What she worries about is (a) them growing apart because of the cucking - indirectly because he's masturbating alone and (b) Dave and Mike getting into open conflict over her, because of Mike needling and belittling him, which she kind of enjoys in a dommy way, but she's aware - boys will be boys - that this kind of bullying might degenerate into open conflict which she'd have to end by dumping Mike. 

On the spanking - 'I like it but not from a man I love' - agree, but I don't think she'd spell it out so openly. As an aside AprilW9 - also known as AprilWould is a GWA audio performer on reddits GoneWildAudio forum. She has a really great cuckold audio on exactly this theme - Like to the reddit post,   Link to my blogpost about it.  

In it, she says something exactly like this while her bull is spanking her. Strong reccomend.

Phew. Anyhow, like I say above, I feel like I've whetted a lot of appetites and I hope I can satisfy them. I'm reluctant to push out much more until I can get a solid set of chapters, even the first four or so, that I'm totally happy with. When I get a chance I'll map out the outlines for each chapter and the first chapters I'm okay with, which may be nearer the middle as I'm finding the beginning the hardest.

Thanks for all the comments. I'm very enthused.

Al.