Friday, November 10, 2006

Welcome here
So, I'm thinking of turning the front page into a blog page, so I can more easily update it, and have people post comments on the entries.
This is just a test posting to see if I can do that

Of course this means I can't use the sort of picture I normally do on the front page, and will have to tone them down a bit, but that shouldn't be too much of an imposition. Tiffany looks just as alluring from the shoulders up.

Clarissa
So, how do I feel Clarissa is coming along? I was fairly happy with the whole scene in Clarissa's house, although I felt the final sex scene lacked the 'oomp'h that earlier scenes with Jenny and Dan managed. I don't think that the 'group' nature of the scene helped it any, but it was necessary to keep the ploit moving and to add some variety to the scenes.
As you may know, I don't harbour any illusions about the nature of this writing. In my view it's all just a vehicle to move the story from sex scene to sex scene. Foreshading, set-up, delivery. That's all it is.
And now, I've foreshaded the evenign with Frank a great deal, and I'm in the middle of set-up for the next delivery. And I'm a bit stuck. So, here I am, messing about with the site rather than writing.
Want to spur me on. Post a comment here. Anything. What you like, what you don't. What you think I should write, what you had for breakfast. Anything. Please.

To post a comment, just click on the first comment below, where it says "1 Comments"
Al.

3 comments:

  1. Anonymous3:51 PM

    OK Alamo, I just love Clarisa, but know it's time to start the actual cuckold sceen. Humiliation can be very erotic when done in a playful, dominant, understanding way. And it's time to dress up hubby more. The maids uniform always works when well written. Go for it. If needs be use some past sceens to get rolling. I know omce you get started a stong episode will appear.

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  2. Tracy3:26 PM

    Alamo,

    This is to good of a story to leave hanging. I was re-reading the first part and I noticed many references to issues that had longer term story relationships. I beleieve if you go back and look at the first 75K or so of the story you'll find you already had some good ideas where you thought this was heading. Take a look, I wouldn;t be surprised if you got a writers boost from this review and received some inspiration to continue. I hope so.

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