Script Offer. F4M [Cuckolding] wife gives [Jerk off Instruction] to her husband. But [No touching] Encourages him to watch [FemDom] [Porn]. His needs are a chore. [Yawn]. She deserves so much better.
Jessica has sidelined her husband in the bedroom department. He's too much of a wimp and in awe of her to complain. He may also be a bit dim.
It's implied here that Jessica has informed her husband that she is having an affair with some man called Dieter and her husband has agreed to this. It seems this happened very recently
At the time she told him about it, she jerked him off. But now, Jessica doesn't want to be lumbered with taking care of hubby's needs all the time.
Notes for anyone thinking about reading it.
*sounds*
also,
*some hint at the emotion of the speaker YMMV*
/emphasis/ maybe obvious from the context.
(I always feel weird adding these as if they're instructions,
but everyone seems to do it. Read it like you want you.)
***** We join, our couple, in bed. ****
Please honey, you're awfully twitchy.
Please. I'm trying to read.
*mildly annoyed* Oh honey. You're tossing and turning. I can't concentrate. What's the matter?
Is it Dieter? You saw me lay out my good pantyhose for tomorrow. You've figured out that I'm going on a date.
*sigh* Yes. I am.
Oh honey. We talked about this. You said you were okay with it.
Stop. Stop. *closes book firmly*
*briskly, hiding her annoyance* Look. We'll talk. It's fine. I know. These ... changes .. take some adjustment. And communication. It's fine. Let's talk.
Oh. What's /that/ look?
*slightly annoyed* Oh I see. Now you have my attention, you're happy again.
And you're flicking your eyes ... down there?
*little laugh* Oh honey. That's, slightly sad. You think when we talk about this, I'm going to jerk you off?
No. No. We need to /communicate/. You don't concentrate when I do that.
I think that's part of the problem, isn't it?
*sigh* I stroked you when I told you about Dieter. And you weren't really listening to the details were you?
Yes, I know you were listening. But you're here, all twitchy with me in bed. You haven't really taken it /on board/ have you?
Yes. Yes. You've accepted that I need to find ... release .. outside our marriage. But baby, /you/ need to take care of /your/self. Okay?
*sigh* Well, clearly you haven't have you? You watched me lay out my lingerie. You /stared/ at me as I got into my nightie.
For goodness sake you even watched my brush out my hair with that puppy-dog face of yours.
And now, here you are, with a raging boner and you're all hot and bothered. How can I sleep or read with you like that?
No. No I'm not going to put you out of my bed. No. I'm not that cruel. We have to keep up, well, at least /this/ level of intimacy.
*firmly* No, I won't.
*sigh* *exasperated* I set you up with everything.
In the den.
The computer? The nice chair? The cheesecake posters on the wall. All the tissues, and the hand cream?
You need to /use/ them.
Yes, I know you do. But you didn't this evening, did you? And now you're all ... twitchy.
Please honey. I don't want to be mean. But I'm not going to touch you every time you want it.
*sigh* Yes. I did /then/, because then, /I/ wanted to.
*sigh* No. You can't just make me want to.
Because /then/, I'd just come back from seeing Deiter and I was all, you know, post-coital and well-fucked.
I /indulged/ you.
*short laugh* So, no /you/ can't make me feel like that.
*brightly* I'll do it for you tomorrow when I get home? Okay?
*snapping* Well it had better start being okay mister, because I am starting to tire of your whining.
*imitating a whiny voice*"Rub my cock. "Rub my cock" Do you hear how pathetic and whiny that is?
This is the whole problem. Dieter doesn't whine about his cock. He fucks it into my throat. Or my cunt.
Are you gonna do that mister? Huh?
No. You're not.
*softening, but with a bit of a sneer on the word 'fine'* And that's okay honey. It's /fine/.
But you need to start doing this for yourself. You need relief. Especially when I'm planning to go out.
Yes. I'd prefer if you did it downstairs in your den. That's why I set it all up for you.
*exasperated* Oh for goodness sake. Because I can't do /everything/ for you.
Some things, well, a man should do alone.
You have an imagination, don't you?
And there's the internet. What porn do you watch?
*more exasperated* Oh come on, I set it up for you. I /told/ you to watch porn. How can that be embarrassing?
Uh huh. Okay. That's fine I suppose.
Well ... Okay. But ...
*snappy, talking over him* Okay. I see the problem here. It's fine. No, really.
Look honey ...
*barked, firmly* No. Really. Stop.
*calmly, very patiently* It's okay. I'm not mad. You've done /really/ well.
And I am so pleased you didn't make a fuss about Dieter, and our new ... arrangement.
But you need ...well, you need to adjust your, /expectations/ in this area too.
Uh huh. You need to stop watching that standard porn. It's boring anyway, but also, it's not really a good, example.
Did you feel like watching it this evening? No. And so you came to bed without any relief.
*leading him* And what got you all excited then?
Yes, watching me lay out my clothes for my date with Dieter. Yes.
So you need to lean in to this. Your nature. Uh huh.
*as if she can't believe how dumb he is* You need me to spell it out? /Really/ honey?
Look baby, there are other kinds of videos you can watch. Women, who can ... help ... You know.
Don't you? You know what Jay Oh Aye is, right?
No. No. It's an acronym. It stands for Jerk Off Instruction.
Yes. Yes. I know you know /how/ to do it. That's not really, eh, the /point/ of JOI.
And there's Jay Oh Eee.?
That's Jerk off Encouragement. Uh huh. There's a lot of overlap.
These ... these ladies can help you. Yes.
And you can use your imagination. That's very important.
No, of course I don't mind. Why would I?
I want you to be happy. As fulfilled as you, /can be/, under the circumstances.
Look. Hand me my laptop.
*opens laptop. keys clicking.* Here. Let's see. Bryci. She's nice. Look, see she has lots of these. JOI and JOE.
JOH? Well, we'll come to that.
Isn't she pretty?
*laughs* Oh honey. No. I'm not jealous. Oh you are silly. How could I be jealous?
*still chuckling*. Okay yes. You can do it. Watch with me. And do as I say. And as she says.
Oh fuck honey. Not so fast! Jesus! Is that what you do?
No, silly. Go slower. Listen. Watch. Let her guide you.
Uh huh. Even slower baby. How long do you usually take?
What? Oh fuck honey. No. That's like ... Actually, that explains a lot. It's not a /race/.
Slower. Listen.
No. You're not 'edging' yet. You know that word? I don't think you know what it means. Not properly.
Okay. I'll show you how in a minute. Take your time.
Nice huh? Yes. But, you need to fill in with your *prompting him like a child*... imagination. Yes.
Oh. Well. I mean, you should imagine things you like.
You like my legs in pantyhose, right? Think about that.
Uh huh. Listen to Bryci. She's helping. She wants you to be happy.
You like thinking about ... my boobs. Right? Uh huh. Think about how they look. Maybe how they look with a man's hands on them.
*laughing* No peeking. This is for when you do this without me.
Good boy. Let's change the video. Bryci will be waiting for us another time.
Here's Trish. There's so many girls who can help you.
See how she's doing that. You match her pace. Do what she says.
Yes baby, let her lead you. Instruct you.
Encourage you.
That's part of the problem, isn't it. You feel you need to perform. To satisfy.
And you can't.
But you don't have to impress these girls. You can just enjoy yourself.
That's it baby. Look at Trish. Watch her hand.
Stroke yourself with her.
Now think about me. Yes. It's okay. Of course it is. I want you to.
Think about me and Dieter.
Ah ah! Not so fast baby.
Yes. I know you could cum now. But don't. Slow down. Stop for a moment, when you need to. When you're nice and close. That's edging. Delay.
Is thinking about me and Dieter good honey? Uh huh.
And you can make those feelings last. Intensify.
This is edging honey.
Take your hand off. Look at Trish. Lovely.
Would you like pictures of me?
Uh huh.
Need to touch yourself again?
Careful baby. Yes. Slow.
You can get there again. Just not too fast.
You need to find your rhythm honey.
Pay attention to how you feel. Uh huh. Feels good.
Remember what excites you. Think about me.
Your wife. Getting fucked.
Uh huh. Watch the girl.
Watch her hand. Listen to her moans.
Uh huh. Slow strokes baby.
His hands, gripping tight, around my ankles.
My soft pussy lips. Uh huh. His cock sliding in.
Imagine. My fingers.
Grabbing the headboard.
Imagine the sounds. Thrusting. Moaning.
Nice baby. Back to Bryci.
His hands. Making fists in my hair.
In your mind honey. Get the image. In your mind.
Your wife being fucked.
Oh yes honey. Good boy. Good boy for stopping.
Rest for a minute. On the edge.
Lovely and slow.
Now? No. It's only been a couple of minutes.
Oh? Hours. Hours and hours.
Yes you can. You just need to practice.
Let's go again. Here's Ceara.
Yes. I saved her. She's maybe a bit more ... advanced.
Don't look at me honey. Imagine me
Use all your senses, baby.
Imagine me sweating. How do I smell?
Makeup and sweat smell. Uh huh.
And his cologne.
Can you hear me? Yes. Moaning. With pleasure.
Ceara knows all about men like you.
He's making me feel so good baby.
So much better than you. No comparison.
It wouldn't be fair.
He's so much more masculine.
Can you hear me? Swearing. Saying his name? Dieter.
Ceara is so mean. She's laughing at you.
Isn't it good honey? You can do this all the time.
In your wank den. By yourself.
You can get so good at it. Uh huh.
Lots and lots of practice.
I know. It's good with me here. Talking.
But you need to remember how it feels.
Accept it. Love being a cuckold.
I have a picture on the laptop.
Uh huh. Of me.
You want to look at it baby?
You can cum when you do.
Are you ready baby?
You've edged enough.
This was just nine minutes.
I want you to get to 12 next time.
Yes. On your own. Tomorrow.
Good boy.
When you get to half an hour, I'll give you more pictures of me.
Uh huh. Save them for the end baby.
For when you jizz for me.
Here you go.
Cum now honey. Spurt it now.
His cock in my mouth. So big. Stretching my lips.
Look how happy I am.
He's dumping his seed in my throat.
It felt so good inside me.
Oh. So good. So good baby.
Yes. Jerk it into the tissues.
Spunk it all up. Jizz it all away.
Good boy. Good boy.
*snap of laptop cover*
*back to brisk, uncaring* Are we done?
Good.
You lie there and recover.
I just want to finish this chapter baby. You can go to sleep now.
Yeah. Night night baby.
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I am torn by the conventions I see on GWA.
Describing what's going on or what is being _felt_ seems better, and then the performer can make of that what they will. But it feels like, if you have to say this, and it's not there in the text anyway, then aren't you failing on the show-don't-tell rule?
And trying to force the performer into a particular mind-set in that case, feels slightly creepily controlling. I know most authors say 'make of it what you will' but just making it passive is still kinda controlling. If you want it that way, read it yourself.
But then, putting, *firmly* in the script also feels kinda dumb. Don't the words imply that by themselves? How hard it is to follow those instructions, and even if you do ignore them and make-it-your-own, isn't even seeing the text kind of annoying?
Or
Just put in explicitly *exasperated* or *excited* or whatever.
Or
Just leave it plain and hope that the words inspire the performer on their own merit.
Of course, I'm anwering my own question - it's the final option. Maybe if I had more confidence in what I'm writing I wouldn't need *emotional*
Ceara knows all about men like you.
He's making me feel so good baby.
So much better than you. No comparison.
It wouldn't be fair.
He's so much more masculine.
Can you hear me? Swearing. Saying his name? Dieter.
Ceara is so mean. She's laughing at you.
Isn't it good honey? You can do this all the time.
In your wank den. By yourself.
You can get so good at it. Uh huh.
Lots and lots of practice.
I know. It's good with me here. Talking.
But you need to remember how it feels.
Accept it. Love being a cuckold.
I have a picture on the laptop.
Uh huh. Of me.
You want to look at it baby?
You can cum when you do.
Are you ready baby?
You've edged enough.
This was just nine minutes.
I want you to get to 12 next time.
Yes. On your own. Tomorrow.
Good boy.
When you get to half an hour, I'll give you more pictures of me.
Uh huh. Save them for the end baby.
For when you jizz for me.
Here you go.
Cum now honey. Spurt it now.
His cock in my mouth. So big. Stretching my lips.
Look how happy I am.
He's dumping his seed in my throat.
It felt so good inside me.
Oh. So good. So good baby.
Yes. Jerk it into the tissues.
Spunk it all up. Jizz it all away.
Good boy. Good boy.
*snap of laptop cover*
*back to brisk, uncaring* Are we done?
Good.
You lie there and recover.
I just want to finish this chapter baby. You can go to sleep now.
Yeah. Night night baby.
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I am torn by the conventions I see on GWA.
Describing what's going on or what is being _felt_ seems better, and then the performer can make of that what they will. But it feels like, if you have to say this, and it's not there in the text anyway, then aren't you failing on the show-don't-tell rule?
And trying to force the performer into a particular mind-set in that case, feels slightly creepily controlling. I know most authors say 'make of it what you will' but just making it passive is still kinda controlling. If you want it that way, read it yourself.
But then, putting, *firmly* in the script also feels kinda dumb. Don't the words imply that by themselves? How hard it is to follow those instructions, and even if you do ignore them and make-it-your-own, isn't even seeing the text kind of annoying?
Or
Just put in explicitly *exasperated* or *excited* or whatever.
Or
Just leave it plain and hope that the words inspire the performer on their own merit.
Of course, I'm anwering my own question - it's the final option. Maybe if I had more confidence in what I'm writing I wouldn't need *emotional*
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