Saturday, November 18, 2006

Working on it!
I'm finally making new edits to Stephanie's Scheme. It's taken a loooong time. One of the things that held me back was that I'd totally forgotten the details of what was going on, so I was dreading having to re-read it to get myself back up to speed again.
Not a good sign that - not wanting to read your old stuff. I guess I knew it was pretty well padded out, and it is. What struck me while re-reading was just how comvoluted and just plain confusing as lot of my syntax is. Some sentences just dont scan at all, leaving the reader wondering what was meant. I've cleaned a little of that up from chapter six onwards, but it's tough going. Also, I wanted to get going on actual new material while the mood was on me, rather than just editing.
I'm reasonably close to posting a new section. Which, give past form, could mean a week or a few years.
In the meantime, I'm really keen that the vistors that are leaving comments on the old lycos comment board, post here instead, so I'm taking down the old page, replacing it with this one and hoping people start to use this.

Friday, November 10, 2006

Welcome here
So, I'm thinking of turning the front page into a blog page, so I can more easily update it, and have people post comments on the entries.
This is just a test posting to see if I can do that

Of course this means I can't use the sort of picture I normally do on the front page, and will have to tone them down a bit, but that shouldn't be too much of an imposition. Tiffany looks just as alluring from the shoulders up.

So, how do I feel Clarissa is coming along? I was fairly happy with the whole scene in Clarissa's house, although I felt the final sex scene lacked the 'oomp'h that earlier scenes with Jenny and Dan managed. I don't think that the 'group' nature of the scene helped it any, but it was necessary to keep the ploit moving and to add some variety to the scenes.
As you may know, I don't harbour any illusions about the nature of this writing. In my view it's all just a vehicle to move the story from sex scene to sex scene. Foreshading, set-up, delivery. That's all it is.
And now, I've foreshaded the evenign with Frank a great deal, and I'm in the middle of set-up for the next delivery. And I'm a bit stuck. So, here I am, messing about with the site rather than writing.
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