Saturday, January 22, 2011

Part 4 of 'Basque'
All getting a bit harder now. Only one post more and that's as far as I've got.

1 comment:

  1. Well you were right, I'm not happy with where this is going, but probably not for the reasons you think. First, things are moving just a bit fast for me, but I suppose that has more to do with the form you are using. Short form can be a bitch. Part of the reason that I like your writing is that you are very good at providing fully rounded characters with evolving motivation.

    Second, I've never gotten the "his is so tiny and yours is so big" thing. Why make an excuse? If you enjoy the idea of your partner being pleasured by another, just say so. If you are trying to be honest with each other, isn't this back sliding?

    Lastly, I'm just too lazy to want to deal with the mess of cum everywhere. Swallow, or deposit, or otherwise contain it.